Oooh so many things! The changes are cool, but sad about Amy and Rory who should be together always.
Sneaky River for changing the timeline again! Poor Doctor. All he wants is his wife. Hopefully soon!

aw wow what a chapter!

(In case they don’t show, I’ve given this chapter four applause emojis)

Ooh boy. Crazy stuff. Can’t wait to see how the doctor fixes this. :)

I actually can’t wait for the next chapter :’) this series and outtakes are basically fanfics of your own series and I love that (who would want more Danni/Doctor AUs?) Also- all those dad/grandpa jokes finally came true, huh Doc? Did Danni regenerate in the universe? Or is she still a red head (if she grew up with Amy and Rory)? Also how did she regenerate?

Can’t wait to see how else Danni has changed in the timeline! Update soon!

CHUCKDAMMIT RIVER YOU HAD ONE JOB: BRING DANNI BACK! ASDFGHJKL-

Woah! Absolutely amazing! Love seeing this what if!

WHAT?!

This just keeps getting better and better. Seriously. A Danni that could have been? Fantastic.

I HAVE BEEN BLESSED! I was hoping you'd update this story, I love it so so much!

ooh boy. that can't be good. can't wait to see how things turn out though! eager for the other danni to return. poor doctor's having a hard time, obviously.

FREAKING RIVER! We all know she had something to do with this, probably saying something to her younger self - maybe don't give up her child? Danni is then hunted like her mother had been, and instead of River killing the Doctor it's probably Danni that is at the Lake instead. The Wedding still happens because she isn't jumping through his timeline, and River is still obsessed at this point in time. Alternate!Past!Doctor has no idea who Danni is because he's never met her, and therefore does fall in love with River.

P.S. I actually have yet to even finish the first story of this series. I was getting really confused on what came after and sometimes I need to read summaries of sequels to keep me going in a series. And then I just kept flinching away from 9 and young 10 being mean/suspicious to Danni and I know that it's more likely to keep running into them throughout the whole story, and I just kept running away from it. It also hurts to think about the Doctor being in love with Rose (I'm not a big fan, and sorry to say I actually didn't get to a point in the story confirming or denying his love to Rose.) when Danni is falling in love with older!10 and 11, but keeps having to go back to those points to make it happen. When I just think about the concept (even though it's pretty different from the Doctor's POV) it sounds more like an abusive relationship. One second he's really nice and loving, and the next he can't even stand her presence. I know that for the Doctor he grows to love her over time, but until Danni is done with the past it's going to seem that way. And I know that it's not the intention, but that's still in the back of my mind as I think about it. I also know I'm missing a lot of the information, so please don't go off on a rant about how I'm completely wrong. I know that I probably am, but with what's at my disposable and what I've read and been able to deduce, it's all I have.(The same could be said for Danni - creating the relationship as she goes through the own timeline. Same could also be said for the Doctor though - freaking hate paradoxes)

On one hand, that’s a sad ending.
On the other, HAHAHAHAHA

oh my

oh no. what a mess. crazy stuff though i can't wait to read more :) awesome chapter and what a crazy twist!