Thank you for keeping Han alive

I absolutely adored this. Everyone was in character, and everything made sense, Anakin's frustration, Luke's shame, Han's reactions, Finn and Poe's sweetness, and the way that throughout it all, even in the later scenes, Rey's inner monologue still resembled that of a child.

I will forever think that it would be OOC for Luke to just disappear one day and abandon his family, no matter what happened, I think this is the best possible explanation for what happened.

Brilliant. This was absolutely brilliant.

Thank you so much...I was so swept away by the possibilities...amazing story, amazing writing!

Great story! I think you did a very good job balancing the grim aspect of the story (the hardships of isolation, abandonment and life on Jakku) with the happier aspect of Anakin & Padme providing whatever help and comfort they can. (the "first period" scene was GOLD, and I love Anakin helping Rey keep the generators working as long as they possibly can)

I think you also did a great job of portraying a practical and resilient personality for Rey, and of portraying an Anakin who's done a lot of healing but is also still damaged.

What a great concept and piece of work! I commend you for such great effort! Truly wonderful x I am in love with this story already and i am so excited to see what happens next! Especially when Rey is reunited with everyone xo

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I LOVE THIS! Thank you so much for writing it! :D (And kudos for including hints of Tatooine Slave Culture)! This is really sweet and awesome as well!

I really like how you included Padmé in here! (Also, my headcanon for Padmé "losing the Will to Live" is actually her Choosing to join with the Force so she can be with ALL of her family... even if circumstances do necessitate their estrangement. "I'm one with the Force and the Force is with them", and all that jazz. :D) I know that she would basically be unconscious (personality-wise) but I also like to think that Anakin's Chosen One abilities allow him to "wake up" non-Force sensitives for special communication with the Mortal Realm. I like to think that he would also do that for Han so that they can haunt Kylo Ben together! :P

And, hey, Rey actually gets to "experience" the Saga in chronological order, and I say "Good or her!" :D

GOD Bless, Keep Up the Good Work, Keep Moving Forward, and May the Force Be with You! :D Amen! :D

I LOVE THIS! Thank you so much for writing it! :D (And kudos for including hints of Tatooine Slave Culture)! This is really sweet and awesome as well! And, hey, Rey actually "experiences" the Saga in chr

Interesting ideas and a good start for a new story XD I have read only one fanfiction that had similar plot like this (only Anakin appeared though),but it has been updated for ages :/ Let's see how the story moves in next chapter :P

I felt for this lonely but determined girl. Looking forward to the next update!