Oh boy, how I missed reading your works! God, I loved this. Lophie was cute and perfect, as always. And Zhante… OMG, I melted! Zhalia Vale definitely sounds wonderful and I loved their whole conversation. Though I’d love it if it could be done like they’re doing now in my country, which is both partners having each other’s names. Like we’d have Lok Casterwill Lambert and Sophie Casterwill Lambert; Zhalia Moon Vale and Dante Moon Vale. I think it would be cute.

Regarding Zhante, I do tend to agree with Nina to some degree. Of course “intimacy is a big deal”, but I think that wouldn’t be an issue at this point. But the way you address it is so sweet and their conversation, aww! But having kids it's a different story. Of course Zhalia would worry about her “motherhood”, give her past and all, and Dante also. Though there’s no reason to worry because they’d be such wonderful parents and they are so lovely when supporting each other! *.* The whole chapter was just perfect.

Well, all in all, I loved this, really! And I would love to see some kind of continuation, like the girls getting pregnant or something like that ;) But thank you for this awesome story! I hope to see more of you soon :)

I'm so happy to see that you have updated! I didn't get to review this any sooner since school was keeping me busy and all, I apologize for that.
Anyways, I loved the two chapters and love how you always find new ideas. I hope to see more of your work soon!
All the love, Sara

Wow2! That's my peanut butter in a crunchy loaf of bread!

These were truly some awesome one-shots of ships sailing in our heart and messing with the blood pressure gauge.

I am going to be completely straightforward here, i have strong emotions towards this.

A nice writting style coupled with good vocabulary and accurate impersonation of the chatacters!

Yeah, guess i can call that perfection and my style.

Vale Moon... Really, it doesnt ring much. But Zhalia Vale...I think it's time for Dante to tranfer his proposal date.

Also, i want Lok as my older brother! End of the story!

This all children talk only made him cutter!

Looking forward for updates.

Never forget to smile and stay awesome!

Lots of love from Irene Rays

Really adorable, I'm glad you're writing for this awesome fandom. Keep up the good work!

MY OTP *fangrils* and as Zhalia's blue hair goes, Lin and Teien have blue hair as well...I think it's the way black hair might be hued. I've seen it in stuff like fanart of other characters(like DC's Katana for example). I guess pitch/normal black might be a bit too dark? Like it wouldn't look very good in certain situations.
anyway art and hues aside. I loved it. though I'll love most things zhante unless it's breakup or death fic so...XD but still zhante and I didn't have to write it. Plus YOU'RE BACK...sorta...and that's good too. I like your style. not always agree with you on your portrayal of Zhalia because she imo is not shy virgin. Maybe she did not sleep around but she is hinted at being an assassin. However I always pass it over on her guilt complex about her past and the fact she actually has emotional connection to Dante, which she obviously did not have with her other targets.
Again I loved this, I love it when these two interact and are so sweet with each other. The reasons I love Zhante is that this is a mature relationship, they're both adults and in an age when relationships do tend to be more long-term and last more than a year, and when people begin to settle down(Dante canonically is 28), get married, have more stable jobs, live together ect. And with them being build on trust and really trusting each other and resolving their issues like well adults should. It's basically how healthy relationship should look like and it's rare nowadays with certain books becoming cultural phenomena be it adult or teenage books.
and Zhante kiddos are my favourite subject. Mummies hair and father's they're to inherit anything from Dante I say eyes, because Dante has curious shade of brown...he has amber eyes that often look actually golden, like friebenders have in ATLA/LoK or like witchers have,
it's shame if it ended up only with him.