Great story.

Aww really liked it very tasteful not trashy thank you for sharing!

this was super cute and i really enjoyed this. the smut was also fabulous. thank you!

LOVE the story! Hope you write more one day!

Nice

loved this, however wouldn't Gajeel have been able to smell their sex still?

My advice to you is: There is no such thing as perfect. You will return to this time after time and still find mistakes or something about the wording disagrees with you but that it only because YOU are your biggest critic. We are constantly pushing ourselves to become better, to hope to improve our writing but as I said before perfection isn't real.

Nice little piece of smut there. The one critique I would give is maybe look at how many times you mention his "growing" member. It can really only get so hard, and it pretty much will stay that way until he's done in this situation. That's just the life experience talking...lol

Good to see you writing again! Its been awhile. I like your stories! Would there be any interest in writing NaLu in a threesome? I think you be good at it!

That was sexy.

Keep up the good work.

Lol, loved this. I like the idea of a small garden in a bottle too lol. The sex was well written

SEXY ,FUNNY ,HOT . i love Nalu and i love your writing so so so much ! Keep going your great works :3

Very cute with a hot lemon. I love arguments that end in passionate sex.

Aaaaahhhh this was so hooooot, I love dominant Lucy! Great job! :D