THIS IS SO GOOD! it's like I'm seeing the anime version of this I sweaaaar! This romance comedy vibe you going on is killing me!

Meh, the story was pretty cute and interesting until this chapter. I rather liked how she the everyone off by kissing his cheek but meh..

What? Elizabrth, sweet innocent Elizabeth was fucking random guys already?

This is so great! I can't wait for another

I'm always so happy to read these and notice the changes :D It's always so good!

X'D
Elaine *laugh* you could have let the dream go on a LITTLE longer *giggle*
God, that was so HOT and then it took a sharp turn towards hilarious XD
I can see Elaine now; with tiny fangs and horns, floating above the flustered Elizabeth, cackling at her demise. XD

Amazing. Would love to read more.

This is amazing! Keep up the good work!

I read the one on AO3; It was rather entertaining I must say.
i am looking forward to both stories; can't wait to see the differences in both!

Ohhh this is quite the interesting tale! I'm curious to where you take it! It seems quite neat and poor ellie in the first chapter, quite embarrassing r ip…

I'm so looking forward to seeing the differences :D The first chapter was such a treat! And I do love how you take their personalities here. It's so interesting to see Meliodas and everyone for that matter get thrown by Elizabeth's actions. I'm as hyped for this as the one on ao3!