real quick, Jacques has stated that he pays his human mine workers the same as the faunus that work there. so it's either jacques pays them the bare minimum or he under pays both groups.

i'm really enjoying this! And i hope you have yang in the harem!

HEH
Fairy Tail.

um.
maybe try and read other RWBY long story fanfic with a more complex story that still follows some canon?
and I don't watch the series anymore, I just watch RWBY on crack volume 7

Interesting story so far but I'm left wondering, how long had Miltia been a vampire, I know it said she was a fledgling but was this before Yang went to Junior's club or after that she was turned. Or did Yang never go to begin with so Junior could be a high vampire for all i know. Still great job and keep it up.

This is great keep it up my guy

I don't watch RWBY anymore for the same reasons, plus the toxic fans, but I still follow fanfictions because these writers usually care more for the series than RT

Please for the love of books DO NOT DELETE this story! It has been one of the true but sadly few treasures to read on this site like those made by “bubbajack” and “Shadow Master.” When their wasn’t any updates for this story I thought it would be another too soon end like many others. But then I saw the update and I was so excited to see it wasn’t over, don’t give up on it, please.

You're forgetting something fundamental about fanfic.

Prior to your starting point everything may be (mostly) canon, but afterwards?

It's all you.

You want to strip mine or cherry pick from actual canon? Then go ahead and do so. It's YOUR story.

If you don't want to follow canon's trail, then don't.

You want Jaune to be a 3/4 Devil of Agares and Phenex descent (with both parents being half devils themselves) and him preventing Pyrrha from getting immolated and changing her into a Devil by way of one of his grandmother's Evil Pieces, that he's inherited, then do so.

You want Jaune to sacrifice himself in Pyrrha's stead only to return for the battle of Haven as a WoW Death Knight and needing the Relic of Creation to be made human once more, than do so.

You want Pyrrha to reincarnate as a WoW Blood Elf Warrior, remember her life on Remnant and work her ass off to return and pull off a big damn hero moment, then do so.

You want Jaune and most of his sisters raised by an incognito Harry and Hermione Potter, who've walked away from the BWW and ended up on Remnant by going through the Veil of Death, with this Jaune secretly being the two time Vale Open Champion?

Then do so.

Same applies to this story. Ignore canon for a moment and ask yourself: "What do I want to do with THIS Remnant?"

Speaking for myself, I have 35 different RWBY plot bunnies in varying stages of getting their plot outlined, chapters drafted or they're stuck in research mode what with having to engage in tech conversions.

Only 5 of them take place with the S3 finale intact. (Yes, I know Mr. Oum wanted to kill her off as well. So what? THIS IS FANFIC! *Kicks the idea into a bottomless pit.*

RT only provided the Lego brocks. I'm the one building things with them. Their own subsequent creation has little bearing upon my own work.

I want Jaune and Pyrrha to ascend into divinity, than they will do so. I want to pull a Bible Black and give Pyrrha additional "equipment", than I will do so.

Doesn't matter what RT is doing.

Fanfic by its very nature is Alternate Universe to begin with.

So again: What do YOU want to do with this version of Remnant that you've created?

I really hope you don't end up canceling this story. It has been one of the more enjoyable ones I have read. I dislike what they have done to canon. But the good news is that this is superior to their canon. If you can you should keep writing this as it is a shame to lose such good work. More importantly though I hope your life improves.

Please don't delete Marshal I love this story

I love this story and will be sad if it goes.
I hope you continue to push forward no matter what happens and that you never lose your spark for writing, especially because you are one of the best writers I've seen on this site.
I wish you luck with any future Story's you Endeavor to write.

Firstly I'm sorry to her what happened to you it's not easy losing someone especially if it's family I know that feeling all to well secondly it's good to see you alright for the most part and still willing to write fanfiction especially since Marshal was the very first fanfiction I've ever read and was the one that got me into reading them since I loved it so much now I understand your feelings on rwby and I agree with them put I think you can do so much more with this story and make it into something that rwby should have been and something I'm sure monty himself would be proud of I mean it's already far more enjoyable to read then rwby altogether but I understand if you don't wish to continue it but I ask you to just think about it first thank you for your time with that said like always have a nice day. P.s I think the new fanfiction idea is awesome keep up the good work ~

Hmmmmmmm wonderful ok take care of yourself

Oooooh nice nice