This story just pulled me in! I would like to see where this goes!
Drop Dead Loved It!
Hope you can more of this (*)

Yes. I like this. More please.

You should keep the story up its nice also you did a really good job.

loved this! the use of all different street names threw me a bit, but i like where you're takung this. keep it up!

Cool story, but may I ask where the interaction between Dipper and Pacifica is? You said Dipcifica in the description, so the story is very light on it. You also don't really need the explaination at the beginning. And, small towns are very much still a thing. The way you wrote it in your explaination implied that you think cities are all there is. Try going on a road trip. I have to drive an hour to the nearest franchise building in my small town. Anyway, that's my daily rant. Bye.

Isnt Chiave keys in italian? If i remember well my italian classes... Anyway this is really nice, i love how you make more glamorous everyones life, like soos and melody have a cafe instead of the shack. And you writting style is really nice too, very descriptive. I love this and i hope you post more of this!

i love it

I'd love to read more of this. It's a wonderful story and Pacifica falling in the train is extra hilarious since I have done the same not only once.
And I love the way you describe things.