I love this story.

Poor Daniel.

Good work.

This is an interesting idea, but I think you ended too abruptly. You could have expanded to show Daniel's reaction to Gate travel etc.
You also fail to go into detail about how Daniel lost his memory.
And allowing anonymous reviews would get you a few more.
Tesekian

aw! that was kind of cute but kind of sad! poor danny! i like this! my sister ednyadove, told me to read it! and i like this!

I like it alot! Please contiune!

that was very nice thank you

I just went back through my rewiews and realized that I hadn't reviewed you back like I had promised. I'm sorry!

I enjoyed reading your fic! It was very well written!

*sigh*... heartbreakingly lovely:)

Excellent!

just the right blend of sweet and funny...i liked!

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Really enjoyed your story. Liked the whole idea. Good capture of the characters.

Just a few suggestions: Felt the introduction needed more explanation as to what the situation was. I was a little lost at first. It would also help if you could double space between each person's dialogue. Makes it easier for the reader to follow.

Not a bad concept, however, you really, really, really need to work on your grammer! You have the potential to be a decent writer; the pshychological aspects of this fic were very well written and fleshed out. Here are some hints: go to a web page that will teach you the basics- proper puncuation, proper sentence structure, etc. Also, please spell check your work before you post it. Like I said, this fic had a good premise, but I really think it would be better if you would rewrite it. Good luck and keep trying! :)

Awww...that was good! Poor Daniel. Loved the marshmellow part, great idea. :)

Great fic. Very intense and sad. Especially to think Daniel would try and slit his own wrists to escape the hell he was in. You should follow this up with some PTSD after effects.

wow. uh...i can't think of anything else to say at the moment...ohhh, poor danny.