Reviews for Blurred Lines |
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Guest chapter 1 . 4/23 Please update! |
Angron chapter 5 . 12/16/2019 when are you going to update this wonderful harem fic? |
Guest chapter 5 . 11/9/2019 Plz update this wonderful harem fic. |
Xealchim chapter 5 . 10/22/2019 Rip |
StrikerL26 chapter 5 . 4/18/2019 Pleeeeaasseee continue this. I love it |
Guest chapter 5 . 4/11/2019 Gonna update? |
Guest chapter 5 . 12/12/2018 Question did you take the idea of the Nova's wanting to "help" humanity from the European justification for the colonization of the Americas and Africa cause that's kind of what it felt like |
Guest chapter 5 . 10/25/2018 Plz update soon. Looking forward to when Ticy and Roxanne joins in. And any other girl that joins aside from Arcadia. Also looking forward to the lemons with all the gals. ;) I wonder if Ticy will learn that Chiffon herself is an Aoi and one of Kazuya's it possible to keep Ouka in the Harem? |
tauquir7 chapter 5 . 9/25/2018 please update soon. |
Freezinglover chapter 5 . 9/4/2018 Hey man, Great work you've got so far. I like that each character is being given their own spotlight. Windy May is cheerful but oriented towards the Aoi group, Cassandra is grieving and loving at the same time, Teslad is surprisingly straightforward with her desires, and Lucy is both amused and annoyed with her future lover's humanness. Satella is sweet and loving but insecure. Just awesome. You've got all their personalities down really well. Loving it. Arcadia interests me. This is the first time I've seen a personality for that isn't robotic. I like how eerily passionate you've made her, filled with love for Kazuya(manga canon) and disgust for her father's crimes(your touch and I think its cool, personally hate Ryuuichi and think he deserved to die). So, yeah. Looking forward to more! Keep it up! Freezing's manga has veered off into the weirder side of the story leaving the stories people really want, Cassandra, Kazuya, Arcadia, LP, all together and interacting, as a wistful afterthought. Fortunately, you've solved some of that in this piece of writing! |
Biblio388 chapter 5 . 7/25/2018 Curious. Haven't gotten anywhere near this far into the canon story, so it is all greek to me at this point. I am enjoying the ride though. Hope to see some more of this and your other stories. |
Biblio388 chapter 4 . 7/25/2018 Lots of difficult decisions but I can see some of what you are trying to do going this direction. Should be interesting to see how the last few girls find him. |
Biblio388 chapter 3 . 7/24/2018 Jeez, I like the overall idea and the execution but I can't help feeling kind of bad for some of the girls. Just shows how involved I am getting in your story. |
Biblio388 chapter 1 . 7/24/2018 Wow. I haven't gotten very far in the manga, so it is interesting to see how you see things. Some intriguing interactions. |
nikhilsarda125 chapter 1 . 7/18/2018 Loved the fic .Please update soon. |