asdfhjlkjlmnbjfkdllhditpfl! hominaahomiinaaahominahooomminaa~

the guy under me surely won't stop reviewing until he reached the very end

Fubiki's plan could work actually! lol... seeing Saitama already kinda fond of Genos for not knowing him at all, i believe a simple request for demonstration of his power would surely be possible to Saitama as long as he could talk with Genos, dundundundunn~

faved! followed! this shiet suddenly intriguing me and amuses me as well as funny... alright, nice i stick around for a moment to read this,

wow! Mosquito Girl fangirl-ing like that is so cute xD
who would've thought huh? and wtf! he still care about a sale!? damn man...

oh. my. god. wth!? they were like, basically worshipping him or something! this is amusing, so funny.. i'm laughing like such a dork i am, lolmao

wow! i get a good laugh out of this!... think i will stick around for a while,

why don't you extend your writing to each chapter? .. just in my opinion don't care to thank you too much for your fanfic

nice

This is amazing and are going to updated you misfits in the middle of nowhere and what happen to your fnaf stories?

Hi

Wow lol, I was actually impressed that you killed off a bunch of those useless characters, and then next chapter you just retcon all of it with some BS. I particularly like how you just glaze over the fact that a clone isn't the original, and the original IS dead, by saying "it's science not fiction", as if that explained or excused anything at all. Cloning is science, for one, and you not being your clone is science. The only fictional part is that we haven't done it IRL.
Anyway, really lame and I think I'll drop the story here, obviously there's never going to be any real consequences in this story, and the house of evolution should have all got one punched into goo way earlier, Mutsuko was a mass murderer (even in your story) before they all suddenly changed their mind and you hand waved their responsibility for it into the bin for no reason.

I don't get why you make filler chapters. It's as boring as it is in Anime.

It doesn't make sense that King is second ranked S class in this story. The only reason he is considered 1st rank in canon is because he gets credit for all of Saitama's kills. Since the very premise of this story is that Saitama does in fact get credited for all of his kills, then you've eliminated the reason for King being famous. Now he is second ranked for no reason.

This story is getting spicy, can't wait for more.