Oh my Stars! I love this so much! Elm's curiosity is absolutely beautifully amazing!

Might I ask when you plan to continue this?

"my timing is impeccable" haha. Ahahah. Right, about that doc.

So far I liked your story very much, the growing connection between Elm and The Doctor are wonderful and I am curious to see a romantic relationship. You did a great job to intertwine your OC into the episodes and make it not seemed forced. I liked your original adventures, specially the first one, just gives time to make Elm more lovely, also she isn't in any way a Mary Sue. I've read a lot Doctor Who/OC fanfiction in the last months (kinda lost in the DW world actually xD) and your story is one of the best. Keep the good work up and looking forward for more great chapters. Hope you don't lost the fun in writing the story cause I devinitly didn't lost it in reading.

Good story so far. I really like Elm as a character and look forward to more chapters.

I don’t want to be annoying or anything but the captain from the Loudon was called lindemann (not lindermann)
Love the story so far though 3

Awesome

Ooh! This is such an interesting story! I love Elm and how she is with all the other characters and her personality! I also love the twists you bring to episodes and the original ones! I can’t wait to see what happens next! See you next update!

I hope you update soon

You know, I’ve been on a massive DW kick for the last month or so in regards to reading fan fictions. I’m now coming across yours and I’m loving what you’re setting up so far with Elm (especially when I’ve read so many different OC stories). With Rose, I’m definitely glad that you’re lighter on her compared to some of the others. She really is such an immature companion, her being 19 and all, but she does care. Anyways... it’ll be interesting to see how the romance is developed once things really start going, whenever that may be.
Also, since I was binge reading this through the day, I was thinking about the man that showed up with River. I’m sure you won’t reveal who he is for quite some time but I do have an idea floating around in my head regarding his relationship to Elm and the Doctor (I’ve read enough of the OC stories to have a pretty good guess). Welp, I think I’ve rambled on long enough and perhaps even caused a little confusion. Great story, I’m looking forward to future chapters.

awesome chapter,could not help to notice this goes up to 12th do you have an ending planed?

y e s it's back

i loved the lil scene in the beginning! totally original, not something i've found in fanfic before, and i love finding new things like that.

i also like the feeling of relief at the end of the chapter. the whole "You gonna be alright on your own?Yeah, I think so."
the vibe of that is just so calming and... t. it's like a puzzle piece was slotted into place and the picture now looks incomplete without it.
might be obvious, but... i love Jack. he's so great.

i'm sorry you struggled with this one, but i'm glad you were able to get past it! happy to see you posting again :D

have a lovely day!

Please continue

This is amazing; definitely one of my favourite Dr fics and trust me, I've read a lot(I have no life). You're a great writer, don't doubt that. Can't wait until the next update!

oh! I really like Elm. super curious as to why she got clearance for the slitheen invasion. really looking forward to more!