Fu*king pathetic protagonist obedient peace of sh*t

Omg what a hell of a story! The scale and scope of it is amazing! Really enjoyed this!

Yeah, gonna have to say this but if i was Carina i would be beyond pissed with Luna telling fucking strangers all that shit about me. It's not her place to do so, and is a massive breach in trust.

Okay... to make things clear I absolutely, inconvincibly, and utterly hated the last two chapters, but chapter 1 to chapter 31 I absolutely loved, and you somehow, someway managed to make me love chapter 34 even If chapter 32 and 33 almost made me drop this fic.

So...they alright now just like that? after all, Rosalie did and said to her..I mean if you wanted to set drama between them, they wouldn't suddenly be all I love you after all the shit that happened last chapter and this chapter...yep seems legit.

Wow...you just completely ruined 31 chapters of plot and character building...my god...so Rosalie is suddenly all Bella is the best fuck Carina, Carina Who? My Mate? Nah fam she is just a bitch who wants to kill a baby who is quite literally killing Bella from the inside.

*Sigh* seriously...this chapter does not make sense at all.

Is Carina getting magic back or is it just the pain of losing it?

I would like to point out that there are schools that allow single parents who can’t afford daycare, to bring they’re child to school. I had a class with a young girl who became a teen mom due to rape, she had no job and no way to pay for childcare, my teachers and principal allowed her to bring her child. Anytime the child got fussy or started crying one of the students who had finished they’re work would help the girl by taking care of the baby. Even the teachers would help by holding the baby while lecturing, walking around with the baby in their arms. So yes, long story short... they’re are schools who allow babies and small children to be with their parent during school hours if needed.

First chapter, so far so good except taking a baby to school that is not allowed and really lame. Why not a house elve or something. No way is it ok to take a baby to class and disrupt others.

I don:t need to read Blackest of Souls first, do I?

This story will continue?

oh man. So glad i found this! You had me worried there when you brought in Tanya and i was just like ughhh for those few chapters. So glad it didn't keep dragging on and you figured out how to get rid of it. By the way, very nice selection of the wedding song. I love that song! :D

The pain the Carina is feeling though...in her core...not sure where you are going with this but possibly something happening to her even though she gave up her magic? Maybe her magic is trying to get back to her? I mean she is still a metamorph...hmmm.. Anyways I can't wait for the next chapter!

wow you really stuck t canon didn't you way to be original it makes the story way less enjoyable

and way more predictable you did the same shit with blackest soul so far all we see is carina basically

do nothing or what she does do has little to no consequences you basically just plug

her in the story and have her just sit there this chapter was really aggravating seeing as

how half of it was pointless just hide her under a fidelius or better yet blow up the vampires they

are basically granite and should explode with a strong blasting spell but, no that would

ruin the same damn canon story line that we readers see all the had to get that out

i meant it just not to be a dick just to give criticism i am always a little harsh

though rabbits of being a keyboard to see a break from canon soon i mean

witches in forks should have already destroyed canon.

I remember some time ago Carina and Luna were wondering if Edward and Bella weren't really mates, I wonder if that's going to come up at any point now Nessie's in the picture, Bella and Carina are Vampires and Edward and Bella are married...

I wasn't sure it was possible but you are doing an excellent job of making me hate Luna congrats. I'm quite conflicted actually because the story seems well-written, though I'm hating a lot of the characters. I think I will need to give this story another try in a few days when I'm in a better mood.