Reviews for All In the Golden Afternoon
Wense chapter 1 . 2/26/2019
Awesome one-shot! The concept of Megamind being this huge roleplay story they created when they were kids is very original!
RainbowColoredHumanBeing chapter 1 . 10/18/2017
Glorious
WootWoo chapter 1 . 9/1/2017
That was quite frankly. Amazing.
DinoGuy2000 chapter 1 . 8/14/2017
Oh, what a nice and sweet fic here.

Good work!
PerpetuallyTired chapter 1 . 7/28/2017
Awww awesome au!
It was lovely and you did an amazing job with the parallels.
Hal is a creep. You did a great job with that too! ;)
Guest chapter 1 . 6/3/2017
Wow! Every story by you is well written! I used to be quite ununderstanding toward bisexual and transgender people, but your writing made me see things in a different way. Thank you for sharing your beautiful creativity!
Guest chapter 1 . 6/1/2017
Love it love it love it
Elf Kid2.0 chapter 1 . 5/29/2017
This. Is. Excellent.

I love the beginning, with the game and the friendship and Roxanne finding a way to be included. It reminded me of when I was a kid, wanting to play with the boys. (Soldiers need a medic, and someone has to figure out how to make guns and tanks out of cardboard, rubber bands, and bottle-caps.) It was extremely true-to-life and well-written.

I loved seeing how the game, and the friendship, evolved over time. I love the different iterations of the game, I love the playing outside and the letters and the tabletop game. It's excellent.

The bit where Megamind asked Roxanne to be his Evil Queen was a joy to read. I kind of felt like this was Syx testing the waters for how she'd react if he admitted to having a crush on her, and I think she responded it time. That was excellent. I also liked Sara's reaction to Syx. I understand why she was jealous, but I don't like how she treated Roxanne's being bisexual. (Seemed realistic, though, sadly.)

Hal came across very well. He was extremely in-character, and everything sounded exactly how it would go. I dislike him, and his type, and you wrote it all extremely well.

The ending was perfect. Metro Man knows what's up; he knows that his besties have mutual secret crushes on one another, and he wants them to get together already! Megamind being concerned about he game not being fair to her, and not wanting to pressure her, was excellent. The kiss at the end was excellent.

This is a wonderful, wonderful story, and I greatly enjoyed it. Thank You for writing this. :D
We Are Renegade Rebels chapter 1 . 5/29/2017
Ahhhhhhhhhh! I AM SCREAMING THIS IS GREAT AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! TOTALLY WICKED AWESOME FAIRY FRIEND
Cris chapter 1 . 5/28/2017
Aww, that was a sweet AU. :) It kinda blew my mind a little bit though. xD I'm still trying to imagine what everybody's real life is like in this universe.
Psychochiquita chapter 1 . 5/28/2017
Beautifully pieced together and threaded with love, I can see it in the way you held their characterization together and how meticulously you layered your story with the movie.

Megamind and D&D.
Gosh, is there anything you CAN'T do?

*rolls an 18*

Hmmm, I guess not...
slytherinshadowhunter67 chapter 1 . 5/28/2017
As always, I adore the creativity and consistency of these lovely characters :) This was a really good read!
SYCTHA chapter 1 . 5/26/2017
OMG THIS IS SO RIDICULOUSLY CUTE IMRKKEJFJEJF
joanhello chapter 1 . 5/26/2017
Ah, your usual excellent work, keeping the characters in character even in this very alternate universe, keeping to the structure of the movie, and at the same time using the archaic setting to good effect. Also, I like the way the slightest hint of queerness sends ordinary citizens into a panic, but alien kids are allowed to mingle freely with the populace. Loved it when Megamind threatened to go to Wisconsin to kidnap Miss Ritchi.
Oliver2016 chapter 1 . 5/26/2017
This. Was. Incredibly sweet and an amazingly interesting way to tell their story! Making it all a game they played out in their heads! That's great!

You're the writer I'll just read no matter the summary because you write gold!
18 | Page 1 2 Next »