That was a cute, emotional and an inspiring ride. I sure am reading the sequel. With that cliffhanger and foreshadowing? Who wouldn't want a sequel?

Loved it!

I have to say, i really like this story. Finally a slightly more realistic portrayal of James.
There is just something in their relationship that seems to pass me by l; as the relationship grows not much is explained about Eliza’s internal happenings or her reactions to James. Sometimes the proximity is explained a bit, but I really miss much more explaining of her feelings towards him and her body’s reaction . Like how a just a slight touch can almost send your heart racing, or how she admires him when he works out... something.
It’s kind of just as if all of a sudden James acts like her boyfriend, but they haven’t even kissed. Their feelings are so apparent, but not really explained. Like why would she expect him to be there ALL the time and why does he feel like he HAS to validate her constantly by showing up or sending her messages? They’re not in a relationship and he’s not a normal guy so I think that’s shes putting a lot of pressure on him. Why doesn’t she have to the same back? It’s not a one way friendship.

Anyway, I think it’s a really good story, these are just my thoughts on small things I personally would’ve wished for. Keep up the good work.

I loved your story. Couldn’t stop reading it. Now on to the sequel.

I absolutely adored this! I hope we get more James/Puppy time in the sequel haha. You've done a phenomenal job getting these two together.

It’s clear that you are a cap stan and you are teying to portray tony as this horrible person. It’s sad really. I actually liked the story.

well i mean... this would be fine and dandy if they were still alive.

Great story!

Whaaat, how did I get to the finish this fast?! Thanks for writing this. Incredible job since this was everything I rarely or never read (Avengers, OC, sequel on the way but not finished) but I am so happy that I made an exeption here. Eventhough my *slight* Bucky-obsession might have increased thousandfold... Great work at describing him and I really liked Eliza!

This was great! I really liked the build of this story, and the pacing was excellent.

Don't get me wrong, I'm totally in LOVE with what I've read of your story so far! But I just had to point out, not to be mean but strictly for your own improvement as a writer, it's spelled Sergeant, not Sargent. I love your story, but that's been killing my OCD lol. Maybe it's a British spelling and I'm unaware of that? Anyway, I love it so far!

Dunluce Castle is in Northern Ireland not the Republic. It is its official name and should maybe be respected regardless of opinion.

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I agree with Elizabeth... FINALLY! It's about TIME THAT THEY KISSED OR ELSE I'D HAVE GONE OUT OF MY MIND!

I'm too lazy to log in right now...but this is awesome! I just love it! Bravo and wow! Can't wait for more!