Interesting take, one of the more original setups I’ve seen. I’m kinda not into mega harem fics anymore, usually I’d say it gets kinda impractical or something if everyone isn’t equal or into each other... other than that I saw a good bit of spelling and grammar issues. Looking forward to seeing some more if you can get back into it.

jesus.. . I don't know why, maybe because I have kids, this first chapter really made me cry. like tears up bawl cry. I almost threw up when you put that rape scene. I don't know, really. I'll keep going up...but... damn... that was almost too much for me.

J'aime bien il faut continuer.

damnit. the story is really good and i hoped to read more chapter.

Yes you’ve spelled Kurenai’s name right

You should continue this it’s really good

any idea when or if you are going to pick this up again?

Going to kusa this early.

Are we gonna collect Karin?

Good luck with your training kick some ass

It might be good if she brought Naruto with. He can meet his cousin, Karin.

Great job shame you stopped or

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Bad way to start your story. It gives you the end before it begins.

Also I’m for Naruto having a loooot of lovers. The fact he is always so happy and kind will attract all types. Hell would love the entire list you put On chapter 1 in his harem. Naruto is a good example of a good Anime character deserving lots of love. Also I am always for slow development like this and time skips are fine but showing his interactions with friends/girls will always be a plus.
Just be carful with the power scaling so he is not to strong to fast.
Will say I was surprised that canon Naruto only had 2 kids.

Keep Up The Good Work!
I’m bad with writing reviews but I like your take on this story.
Also I remembered another girl for the list Ryuuzetsu.