Ugh. Acnologia. Thank you for giving us one last taste of his corruption. How can I not get behind a man so cold but so in love with the mother of his child? I don't care. He's my favourite character though this whole escapade.
I need more of this universe, it's too good.
Wonderful stuff!

Wow such a good chapter. Drugs are scary. The really do hurt more than just the user and I am honestly glad Jellal finally realized he went too far and beefed help.

I can't even rightly express how much I loved this. This whole story and this chapter in particular. Seeing Cana and Loke, their roles perfect, Laxus was a welcomed sight. God, I love how you portrayed him. The garage, Lord Heartfilia and Acnologia butting heads.
I'm so, so sad that there is a short epilogue and that's it. I loved the punishment. This is my favourite story on this site. Potentially ever. You did an excellent job, though I know you stepped out of your comfort zone to do it. It was great and I'm glad you took a chance in writing it.
I will return to read this for sure and recommend it to everyone.

Jesus. Drugs terrify me because it's so easy to lose yourself in them and you don't even feel the ugly crash. I have a love/hate with drugs. This is surreal. Jellal was so deep into it, you could tell Ultear was terrified but from Jellal's point of view, it wasn't that urgent. Idk if those words are right. It's 4am. But I love this. I am fascinated with how well you tell this from a high. Or a crash. It would be easy to be lazy with the narrative and chalk it off to the narrator's bad trip but this is coolies. Good shit.

Ultear is a saint. Or a Virgo. What did Jellal do to deserve someone like her.

Jellal is a hot mess. Why the heck can't he avoid Ur Milkcovich? Honestly. And buying dirty blow? Gawd.

Really, though, that was a great chapter. I love that everyone knows his dirty secret but everyone is just... letting it be. Acnologia murders me. Murders, I say. I just want him to grab Jellal and tell him that he loves him. And I want him to leave him to suffer because that's what kind of man he is.

Great work. I can't wait until the next.

P.S. you made my day with Laxus beneath the hood of his junker. It's what my dreams are made of. Seriously.

(I had to log out because it says I already reviewed this.)

Jellal and his harem. I like the addition you made, and the breaking it up by months, it makes it flow more smoothly.

Jellal is a bloody mess. A filthy, filthy mess and I love him for it. If I was Ultear, I'd be pissed that he was banging whoever in my car. Also, like Jellal, I can't decide if she's pissed he's a mess of if he is just sloppy about it.

My favourite parts are always about Laxus. The thought of him rebuilding an old junker spoke to me. My redneck heart loved it about as much as the idea of him getting into those fight rings and messing up his hands.

The party scene was great; I'm a big fan of the drama and debauchery that came after. Dunno why I love that he didn't know her name? But I do.

GODDDDD
This was the greatest chapter. This is my most favourite. Fall of Mercutio's got nothing on this, I've decided. I love that Jellal thinks Yukino is magical. I wasn't sure how I felt about them until that moment but I ship it. Laxus' part was perfect as always. And I was super, super stoked when you gave me so much Acnologia. My heart melted when he gave little Jellal in his blue uniform and oxfords toffees to be sweet. I have a terrible problem. I love terrible men. I can't wait for the next, and for more Siegrain in Lutalica. I just kind of want to pump you for more content all the time because I'm needy.
This was super good.

Keep that addict away from Yukino! Lol but seriously needs a bigger slap of reality to his face than what he has received so far. Maybe that will set him straight

Lovin it!

Ah, stories with minds of their own. Fill is necessary sometimes, I get it. It was still enjoyable so don't beat yourself up about it.

I'm super, super curious about Lisanna, like I was/still am about Natsu and I fear that I will never get my answer about either. It's a huge cocktease but I like it.

Christmas time and this just worked for me. Nice imagery with the blue snow and the dirtiness that hides poorly beneath. Lovely.

I'm really enjoying how you're characterizing Acnologia. He is a 'give zero fucks, holdout until you die' kind of person. Wonderful. I want to see more of him. Always. Part of me, like Jellal, wants him just to explode. Another part of me wants him to be an excellent poker player.

Insufferably, I can't wait until the next!

Ughhhh. It's so good. Thanks for updating. My heart hurts for Anna. She's the one getting pummeled by Jellal's self-destruction (I wouldn't have it any other way.) Acnologia is marvelous as always. The best part, though, oddly, was the lines off the back of the toilet. I feel like that there, that one instance, perfectly sums up what it's like to be in that place where all you can think about is getting numb. Very nicely done, it was excellent.

Amazing so far, really enjoyed reading this. You've made it totally believable, I really like how you've portrayed Jellal. Gotta check out the sequel to this. Keep up the good work and thanks for the good read!

Laxus and Jellal together are what all of my dreams are made of. Every chapter I hope for more of them together but really, it's the brief snippets that you give me that keeps me chomping for more. Less is more, always.

You have Ultear playing such an awesome role here. It fits and you did such a nice job with her. I don't know what your plans are for her and Bestie Jellal but I hope they're messy as hell.

It crushed me a little when Jellal destroyed all of the things that made him feel childish. What a day. I still remember the day I did that to my own things. The way you portrayed that was great.

And how about Acnologia? I want him to be a dad and I want him to be horrible. I want him to be a little bit nice but mostly not. He loves his wife and he loves his son but he's just so fucked up? Yes. I might be overthinking it, but I love me some complex characters and Acnologia, my friend, is a complex character. I wish we could see more of him always.

And here I was wondering of it was Mirajane or Angel and it ended up being Lisanna. Bad girl Lisanna is never a bad thing.

Be still my heart. Was that my glorious Lisanna? I can't say how excited that makes me. Being the little sister, I just know she's a wreck. This was awesome. You're making all my dreams come true. I was super excited to read this and it stayed that way. What a train wreck. A beautiful one. I never want it to end. I think this is your best work. Or the best that I've read.