Oh Mylanta! It’s a train wreck. I couldn’t not read it, or rather skim it to the end.

THIS story suits it's title..
It is a mess made by the author..

Overall story review :- It's not good :(
I expected BxE but it's not like that :(
I don't like it ಠ_ಠ

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Edward never wanted the child in the first place and now he's mad because bella *checks notes* decides to cut him out. he should be happy. now he won't have to compete with his kid. this is what he wanted

She got an std….on purpose? Cause simply telling Bella and her and Edward was...too hard? LOL So fucking stupid.

Tanya being crazy really changes nothing. It doesn't make Edward any less responsible...it doesn't make him anymore redeemable. He cant be forgiven for what he did, what he continued to do.

I cant believe that he would have unprotected sex with someone and then have unprotected sex with bella…...its just...so fucking wrong.

So, Edward is having unprotected sex with Tanya because his wife is pregnant? That's what he said. But really its because he's a piece of shit.

Edward is a piece of shit.

ewww Irina? LOL

We never get the chance to read the sequel

I kinda hope that they never except irinas bastard.

Hes gonna be with Irina? Tanyas SISTER from the twilight saga?

He keeps going on about his ‘idiotic’ actions. Idiotic is far too tame a word for what he did. I’d go as far as to call it downright evil or psychotic. Sorry.