Well done. I enjoyed this a lot.

D4rK

grevious

as a huge general previous fanboy.. I must say... true master piece my friend.

Another great chapter showcasing the brutality of Grievous.

The Jedi are on the clock, survive and tell of their encounter or perish at the hands of their newest enemy. (Well we know what happens. So I'm doing this for drama)

You've shown his power by taking the blunt of a Force push and catching the pipe with his bare hands. But you also showed he's cunning. By allowing Warrgo to attack first, Grievous used the Jedi own strength against him, which gave him the easy victory.

A perfect showcase of the TRUE Grievous.

He will break them, make them cower in fear. Feel Hope and the Force abandon them and then he will give them the reason to die.

Now that's an entrance. I could easily see this done on the 03 Clone Wars, just him rising out of the flames completely unharmed and just staring down at his enemies. You really have captured his character. Well done!

"It's a trap!" Damnit I couldn't help myself. I like it how they think they have what they wanted, only for it to snatched away and are then suddenly left in the dark. (Both figuratively and literally)

This is what the Separatist droids should have been. A foreboding force, endlessly on the march to their goal. Not... bumbling, comic reliefs (which that weren't even funny, just annoying and mind-numbing).

So I'm going to be reviewing one chapter per day. Otherwise, I feel it be crowded if I review all chapters in the span of one hour.

I'm really loving the story!

I'm loving this so far! General Grievous from 2003 was awesome.

Um... I think you were saying 2003, but the nightmarish disgrace of 2008 GG must have flashed in your mind and made you write 2008 instead.

You're a tick in my books for anyone who praises what the Separatist Jedi Hunter should have been.

Since you've already written in the entire story I'll be reviewing each chapter.

Can't believe I almost missed this.