| Reviews for Naruto The Thunder God |
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   Kamado-Uchiha Senjuro chapter 2 . 6/13 This shit is soo bad. It looks like he pulled everything out of his ass at the last moment |
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/26 This Shit is SOO fucking SHITY ITS NOT EVEN FUNNY ANYMORE you fucking ruined fanfiction |
| Guest chapter 2 . 5/19 What jumble of words did i just read |
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/8 Story progressed to fast and didn't like it |
| norahc chapter 3 . 3/4 you messed up the preta path is the path that absorbs chakra the human path is the one that takes peoples souls |
| Billy Cook chapter 6 . 11/20/2019 WE WANT MORE RIGHT NOW PLZ |
| I-Nex-I chapter 1 . 8/1/2019 Jesus Christ |
| NatsuSparda09828 chapter 6 . 7/19/2019 I wish you luck i hope to read your stories on wattpad when i find them |
| Guest chapter 2 . 6/5/2019 What in God's name did I just read |
| daperbianchicomanda chapter 1 . 2/19/2019 wth |
| geardagum chapter 5 . 10/27/2018 You've written four stories, but have made no effort to even improve your handle on the English language.. so disappointing. Please make a better effort on your stories, the layout is just unpleasant, and the story line is confusing and enigmatic. |
| geardagum chapter 1 . 10/27/2018 this story is a travesty |
| DEVIL chapter 1 . 10/16/2018 This is the dumpest fanfic that I ever read |
| monsterkillers124 chapter 1 . 9/20/2018 you need to remember a big part to writing is remembering to revise your draft so you don't make mistakes like a never-ending sentence without any punctuation or quotations because there are so many of these things in your story and to be quite honest it's annoying |
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/17/2018 This story is really confusing. There are little things called "PUNCTUATION MARKS", "QUOTATION MARKS", and "GRAMMAR". I think this story needs a bunch of beta readers and an editor. |
