I read this a couple months ago but god you have no idea how invested I am to this one story. The way you write gives me life, it's borderline perfect and has me cackling well after hours! My sense of humour is a little dark and lord I love how this story rolls into it. Please please please please PLEASE do not leave this literal gift from the heavens unfinished, I don't think my 2 braincells could handle it. About the rewrite, I don't think it's possible to make this any better! But I'd love to see it finished first!1!1!

I can't tell you how much I've enjoyed this story! It's one of the best written ones I've come across in ages. Please keep on with it, I'd love to see where it goes!

Please more I just want them to confess already it’s so perfect

No rewrites, please. The story is fine as it is. It's what it is meant to be. If you want to rewrite it after it's done, then do so but not now. You're just feeling overwhelmed by the events of the story and that's how it should be, too. This is heavy stuff but well done. Just sit yourself down and write something - anything - the characters tell you about their feelings. It will be the right thing to get them through this. Just please, no trial. That's too much and too trite. Focus on Haruhi's recovery process which is what readers will want to know about and how she gets back to some sort of normality (if you can). She won't ever fully, but she can grow, can't she? And with support from friends (male and female) she will. Just don't give yourself reasons to stop proceeding which is what all the other ideas you're considering are doing. Okay. I've gone on enough but just keep moving forward with what you have until the story is told - however it's told - and if you have to end it sooner than later - so be it. But get the job done. You'll be glad you did. I'll be here to read it.

This may have been written a while back but it's wonderful. Like reading an actual book. Got pulled right in

Best Ouran story ever, hope you plod on bc it’s way to perfect to stop

I was thinking, maybe you should wait until after you're finished writing the story to go back and edit it. Seeing the final product would be so gratifying! Even with all of the mistakes in it! Finish first, edit later!

A re-write is not necessary, but if you feel so inclined then go ahead. I feel bad for Haruhi, being assaulted and mistaken as Naomi. Luckily she made it out alive, just barely though. Poor Honey got the blame for leaving Haruhi alone, when he shouldn't have. I wonder how the conversation will go in the next chapter? Will Kyoya comfort Haruhi? Will Haruhi ever be normal again? Only time will tell. Thanks for writing this fanfic! I had a blast reading it! If you wish to continue the story, please feel free to do so! Have a great day and good luck with everything!

The thing that threw me for a loop was Kyoya's dream (or nightmare rather) of Takaeda (aka Mr. Stalker Man) breaking into his residence and almost kidnapping Haruhi, then Kyoya waking up in a cold sweat. That dream was too crazy! Luckily, Honey was there to help Kyoya out when he needed it. Thanks for writing this story! It's really great!

So it finally happened... Haruhi's apartment was broken into by none other than Mr. Stalker Man himself! What a douche! But considering the guy isn't in a healthy state of mind, I can't blame him. I'm just glad that no one got hurt/ no one of grave consequence was there when it happened. Thank goodness! I just hope this madness will end with no one getting seriously injured or whatnot. Thanks for writing this awesome story! I've enjoyed it immensely!

This latest chapter was great! I love how Haruhi smiled and said to Kyoya, "I'm glad you exist!" And I love how Haruhi keeps standing up for Kyoya, saying, "He's smarter than you give him credit for!" It's super adorable! Hopefully Yoshio will figure out what happened with Kyoya, so he can help him better, since they are father and son. Family needs to stick together! Hopefully Haruhi and her father can get out of this predicament they're in unscathed! That stalker means business! Hopefully he doesn't come around the Ootori residence! That would be a big mistake! But it would also make things more interesting! Hopefully not too interesting! Great story so far! Keep up the great work!

I love the story so far, but where is the stalker? He sure is taking his sweet time. Is he going to make a comeback? Will Kyoya and Haruhi be ready for him when he comes? Will Stalker Man take them by surprise? Will Kyoya be able to protect Haruhi? Will the cat (Noel) live through the madness? Only time will tell...

So, is this a romance or shipping fic? (Just wondering, I'm fine either way)

"The twins have been confined." Love it.
I hope no one forgets, while Haruhi has been through something horrifically traumatic, that Kyoya has been through it too. He's going to need as much help as she will to come through this. Tachibana will know this.
The way Kyoya and Haruhi have been there for each other since the beginning is heartfelt and real. What started as friendship is deepening. If into an everlasting friendship or something more personal, we'll see, but I think the dynamic is written well.
In the paragraph about the stars, did you mean to say Fuyumi or Haruhi?
I don't know about starting it over. I want to know the ending first. However, making the flow smoother and doing some more with the plot might be a good thing. Reading it from the beginning, it is choppy, but not everywhere. If you're going to do it, PLEASE don't change the first chapter. Not a word. I think it's perfect.

I love Kyoya! Doesn’t like the stars but spins tragic tales for Fuyumi (or did you mean Haruhi?). That paragraph was very poetic.
If you want to rewrite the story, go ahead. But please don’t delete this one until the other one is finished. This story may not be perfect, but I like rereading it. Post the rewrite under a different title, or with the same title but with (rewrite) added to it.
Thanks for updating!