Oh good, I'm so glad I wasn't the only one seeing this mess. Please fix this as soon as you have the time to do it.

Also, I personally feel like the chapters are a bit too short. Try expanding your paragraphs and ass a little action in between dialogues to give it more life. Don't be afraid to take all the time you need to write and rewrite your work. There's no rush after all. But if this is the format you're sticking to then go on ahead then.

All in all, looking forward for more. Hope to see you again next chapter~

looking forward for more!

I think...there's a problem with your format for the second chapter but still looking forward to more!