wow an ordeal Mac went through. But with the help of his friends and his own determination he made it.

Awesome work!

This was awesome! I love this type of Mac whump.
Your writing is descriptive and very well done.
I enjoyed the read. :)

Awesome. But Mac's jeep is maroon

I am just drawn into the story like I am there

I am in bliss. You are a born storyteller

It was just so deep and rending...to see mac get himself back together and everyone being there for him it was just...you are awesome,keep writing

Thank you for writing such a wonderful, exciting, full of suspense story, please write again H/C ! I'm looking forward reading other like this!

Loved it! Write more! :P :P

What a great end. I hope Mac can become more and more himself as time goes on. If Murdoc and Sarana were to take on the team maybe they give the teams hints (anonymous tips) on a bad deal (like selling of weapons or illegal government intel) that's about to go down when really they are leading them into a trap!

Great job! I encourage you to keep writing and I'll be looking forward to reading more of your work.

Great finish.

wonderful job. so glad to see mac is gonna be ok even if will still take some more time.

I have really enjoyed reading this story. I will tell you at first I was worried, as a therapist, I thought, oh my, how is she ever going to get the old Mac back to being Mac after what happened! I think you did a beautiful job of having his family help him. I think it would be interesting in your next story if you had Mac seeing a counselor, not at Phoenix, perhaps, because I think he is so private, but maybe one at the VA, that both he and Jack saw after coming back from the war. You could even have Sally having been one of the ones to really push for some alternative therapy. You know those who have suffered trauma do really well working with animals. Maybe he starts volunteering at a shelter, or even working with horses. I think veterans/police officers have a hard time letting their guards down, but I would have the counselor be a man, but if you used a woman, at least someone who served in battle-somehow I think Mac and Jack would respond well to that. These are just ideas, as you asked for some suggestions. I love the way you write Mac and Jack. I think you stay true to that bond, adding just enough Bozer and Riley for flavor. Admittedly, I am a Mac and Jack girl. So I am always going to lean towards them and could be a tad bit biased. lol Thank you for sharing your time and talent and I look forward to your next adventure.

Wonderful story! So glad you wrote it and shared it with us. The pace of your updates was so nice for the reader - we didn't lose any continuity of the story. But the great quality of your story was consistent throughout - despite the frequent updates. And of course Jack would always be checking on Mac - all the time. Perfect ending!

Extremely intense story, well done. Thanks for sharing. Looking forward to more from you.