Reviews for Procured Immortality
narutouzumaki9718 chapter 3 . 4/18
Great story please update soon!
Santan Suprah chapter 3 . 12/2/2019
did i miss something, need a bit of exposition on Atlanta and Visaly
bananahead1 chapter 1 . 7/30/2019
no i wont join him when theres only 6000 words
YuukiAsuna-Chan chapter 3 . 10/23/2018
OC sucks.
Monster King chapter 3 . 1/17/2018
Great story I really liked it can't wait until the next update comes.
XGalenMarekX chapter 3 . 12/14/2017
I really liked this so far. Your grammar is good, i can read without my eyes bleeding like most of ffs here. Premise is good too. I hope you can give time for main pairing in next chapters. Also that was a very large timeskip. Maybe you can consider some flashbacks?

Anyway, i am mostly excited because of Rhea pairing. Really i was waiting for it, she and Hestia are my favorites among asshole and rapist shits in Olympians. They need some serious attention instead of that slut(Aphrodite). I hope you can update regularly and don't abandon this.
Kage ongami chapter 3 . 11/27/2017
Great chapters really hope to see naruto in this avatar
ARSLOTHES chapter 3 . 11/23/2017
looking forward to the next chapter
Davidlhson chapter 3 . 11/21/2017
I like this story looking forward to the next chapter
biob1 chapter 3 . 11/8/2017
Looking forward to next chapter. Hopefully more info
Me chapter 3 . 11/2/2017
If you intend for chapters to be this short, you need to write more informative, and less broadly. This chapter made no sense and honestly it felt like a poorly written filled chapter. I like the concept of your story, please try to improve.
Guest chapter 3 . 11/1/2017
What everyone hate in every fanfic is OC.. so I hope they're not gonna be Main char, and be dead soon..
Banjo the Fox chapter 3 . 11/2/2017
I still like it and I honestly was not expecting an update to this, but I feel like we're missing a lot...
GrandmasterOtaku chapter 3 . 11/2/2017
Great chapter. Can't wait for the next release. Has a nice plotline. Keep up the good work
GrandmasterOtaku chapter 1 . 11/2/2017
Great chapter. Can't wait for the next release. Has a nice plotline. Keep up the good work.
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