Reviews for Procured Immortality |
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narutouzumaki9718 chapter 3 . 4/18 Great story please update soon! |
Santan Suprah chapter 3 . 12/2/2019 did i miss something, need a bit of exposition on Atlanta and Visaly |
bananahead1 chapter 1 . 7/30/2019 no i wont join him when theres only 6000 words |
YuukiAsuna-Chan chapter 3 . 10/23/2018 OC sucks. |
Monster King chapter 3 . 1/17/2018 Great story I really liked it can't wait until the next update comes. |
XGalenMarekX chapter 3 . 12/14/2017 I really liked this so far. Your grammar is good, i can read without my eyes bleeding like most of ffs here. Premise is good too. I hope you can give time for main pairing in next chapters. Also that was a very large timeskip. Maybe you can consider some flashbacks? Anyway, i am mostly excited because of Rhea pairing. Really i was waiting for it, she and Hestia are my favorites among asshole and rapist shits in Olympians. They need some serious attention instead of that slut(Aphrodite). I hope you can update regularly and don't abandon this. |
Kage ongami chapter 3 . 11/27/2017 Great chapters really hope to see naruto in this avatar |
ARSLOTHES chapter 3 . 11/23/2017 looking forward to the next chapter |
Davidlhson chapter 3 . 11/21/2017 I like this story looking forward to the next chapter |
biob1 chapter 3 . 11/8/2017 Looking forward to next chapter. Hopefully more info |
Me chapter 3 . 11/2/2017 If you intend for chapters to be this short, you need to write more informative, and less broadly. This chapter made no sense and honestly it felt like a poorly written filled chapter. I like the concept of your story, please try to improve. |
Guest chapter 3 . 11/1/2017 What everyone hate in every fanfic is OC.. so I hope they're not gonna be Main char, and be dead soon.. |
Banjo the Fox chapter 3 . 11/2/2017 I still like it and I honestly was not expecting an update to this, but I feel like we're missing a lot... |
GrandmasterOtaku chapter 3 . 11/2/2017 Great chapter. Can't wait for the next release. Has a nice plotline. Keep up the good work |
GrandmasterOtaku chapter 1 . 11/2/2017 Great chapter. Can't wait for the next release. Has a nice plotline. Keep up the good work. |