Reviews for Debts Paid in Blood and Wrath
246vili chapter 33 . 6/7
That will be one hell of a meeting. Btw, does Jon has an undead with him this time? Because without one, it will be much more harder to convince of the other two participants to make peace and march north together to face the White Walkers and their near limitless army of dead.

Keep up the good work.
TheOnlyKing chapter 33 . 6/6
Good chapter but you gotta be kidding me, how can you end it in that spot? These cliffhangers aren't good man :(
Bio RL chapter 33 . 6/5
thanks for the chapter
Jacksonion Democracy chapter 19 . 4/29
Well that's just hella depressing. Surprised MC didn't explain why he did what he has done, literally would not ruin any possible plans and probably help bring him closure as well as really show where his family fuked up. Still sad that MC is a prick tho.
Jacksonion Democracy chapter 18 . 4/29
Wow. Everybody is being assholes, happy that Tyrion is away from this $hit fest.
Jacksonion Democracy chapter 17 . 4/29
Bruh - why is he being such a twat? Like yeah, his upbringing could explain a little of his inferiority complex and his heartlessness - but he is seriously threatening/insulting innocent children simply for being in his way? He is falling down into the chasm of wholeness, for a pointless goal (yeah become King or Lord Lannister - what then? By that point he will have no friends, no family, no people he actually trusts. What's the point of being at the top if the only thing it brings you is loneliness, danger, and false power?)
Jacksonion Democracy chapter 14 . 4/29
Kinda sad that MC basically threw away his ties with Jaime and Tyrion, but hey ho so far he hasnt killed them.
Jacksonion Democracy chapter 13 . 4/29
Yo - would be cool for MC to fight as champion for Tyrion as a big fück you to Tywin and Cersei, as well as considering that Tyrion has actually been good to him even if he has made mistakes (like family does).
Jacksonion Democracy chapter 12 . 4/29
Yeah, now also including Jaime in the "don't kill list". Its one thing to be ruthless to your enemies, but to be equally cruel against your allies (especially those who are also family)? Walking a thin line between morally grey and sshole.
Jacksonion Democracy chapter 11 . 4/29
I can understand why he would want to kill Cersei as she literally tried to kill him over something he had nothing to do with, but Tyrion and Jaime? Jaime doesn't even really care about being "Lord Lannister" so he is no threat and even though they may not get along well they are still brothers and Jaime has done no great wrong to him. Tyrion makes even less sense, yes MC wants to be the Lord and after Jaime Tyrion is next in line, but they actually get along pretty good. I get MC is a psychopath and evil(ish), but there is a difference between being ambitious person who has a goal and will never stop versus being a greedy idiot who will sacrifice everything to be the top. If he tries to kill Tyrion I'm out.
Alphapaladin chapter 13 . 4/3
Why would Loren care about the RW? Does he think it'd be better to let Robb regroup in the North and raise a new host?
Alphapaladin chapter 9 . 4/3
What was the point of this OC? You might as well have just said "What if Tyrion wasn't a dwarf", because that is basically what this story is
Alphapaladin chapter 4 . 4/3
Bruh, the baby brother giving Tyrion orders
Alphapaladin chapter 3 . 4/3
I do disagree a bit with what Loren said though, as far as Joffrey knew, Ned Stark was a traitor. He publicly ordered for Joffrey and his siblings to be arrested and said Joffrey had no claim to the throne. Joffrey didn't know about Cersei/Jaime, and even if he did it's still treason since he's legally Robert's son and there's no DNA testing to disprove that, anymore than there was to prove that Daeron II was the son of Aemon and Naerys, only suspicion. Treason has always been a capital crime, and it would be weakness to let Ned keep his life, most of the time you'd get tortured for attempting to overthrow a king. It's Jaime's fault for getting captured and ruining the strong Lannister position, at the time of Ned's execution the Riverlands had been all but conquered, it's lord captured and capital sieged, a green boy with 1/3 of the men marching against a two seasoned commanders. No one would've expected that it'd all get turned on it's head
Alphapaladin chapter 1 . 4/3
I hate the Starks, hope this Loren gives them what for
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