and make it double

dude you right banshee are Irish screaming creatures

I’m really happy with Kusuki’s death. Perfectly how it should happen ! Anti climatic and pathetic, like him !

Loved Hinata’s reaction too, she’s so precious ! And Naruto’s “I like how you whisper” was hilarious

Wuuuuuutttt ?! What is going on ? So many questions ! It’s crazy

Cool explanation for the sealing, although that's not gonna make much sense when/if you get to shippuden, you'll have to remember to explain how that was a lie to cover up how narutos dad is the (spoiler alert for people who haven't seen shippuden) fourth hokage, great chapter tho, i like the mature and hidden version of naruto youre taking.

very good story, I hope you continue, although I expected more from the villain, but nah !, greeting, bye!

I have reread this great story.
Story has plenty of action, suspense and some humor.
Story could use more romance/sex scenes.
Story definitely needs to be updated.

Joder! Demasiado bueno para terminar ahí hahahahah. Creo que de todos los fics que he leído, en dónde inventan una misión no Canon, esta misión ha estado buenísima. De hecho, creo que es mi favorito.

Realmente no puedo esperar para que actualizar pronto, ni tampoco sé porque no continúe leyendo esto cuando lo encontré por primera vez. Es fantástico. Buen trabajo.

I’m not crying YOUR crying.

KEEP BEING AWESOME!

Over been waiting so long for an update to this greatness thinking it couldn't get any better...I WAS WENT THIS WAS FANTASTIC! the mystery zombie mission was captivating and thrilling from start to definitely finish! The new twists were refreshing and teeth chatting all the way up to the referral that was handled with good creative skill that still respects actual Canon characteristics so great job!

Hi there

It seems to me that Sasuke has issue with Naruto's power, I wonder how will change things...

Anyway, this creepy arc was fun, with Detective style writing!

Anyway, keep up the great writing and stay safe!

so, the rookies know the truth about naruto.
But we all know the fact that bijuu can only be sealed in babies is bullshit since beside naruto, kyuubi was also successfully sealed into an aged woman, a teen girl and an adult uchiha.

I really liked this chapter, I loved how you did the reviled, and everyone's reaction. I can't wait to see more.

Funny

Awwww