This is probably my twentieth time reading this. I love your spin on Triton and Percy's relationship! And how you write Amphitrite, it's so well done! I love it, thank you for writing this!

This is really good!
I like that you show how Triton starts to realize that Percy does not have as great of a life as he originally thought, and show how this slowly starts to develop a friendship between the two of them.

You should definitely continue this! (but if you don't want to I understand. Sometimes things just don't interest us anymore.) Your writing is very good, and you do a good job portraying emotions. sometimes explicitly saying what their feeling and sometimes describing it!

Please write another chapter I want to know where this goes! (Its been a while though :( )

Hope you’re well.
I love this story and can’t wait to see what happens next.

Please update

So… I really love this, and since its been a couple years I was wondering if you had any plans to continue it? If not that's fine, your story you do you, but it would be nice if you could let us know in an author's note or something? Thanks

I liked this story, though the difference in personality against Percy seems a bit abrupt for Triton and his mother, compared to chapter 2

Great story,amazing feeling and emotion captured in this story and Amphitrite and triton are written really well so all in all its a wonderful story,pls continue as this has a future as one of the best percy jackson stories I have ever read

please update soon

Liked it!

It was really good! Pls update soon.

Ahhhh please update!

This is sad as well :( brought tears to my eyes :(

Is sad :( But I like the story :)

Great work!
I’m loving the interactions between the brothers.

I liked it very much!

Looking forward to more :-)