Don't worry. It was perfect! Do what you love. 3

This is amazing! And Steven, it's not your fault. You're not your mom, even if you carry her gem. You tried everything you could.

Only goof I noticed was that you accidentally seperated the letter C from the word Cluster. Other than that, it's perfect. :)

I loved it!

This was amazing! First Steven Universe fanfic I read and I lived it!

well, the story was great! I love the angst in his thoughts then the cute way it was finished. a few spelling errors in the beginning but other than that, it was a great story good job.

I thought it was great but I think you could add some more emotion.