Wow...just wow! This story is really well written and interesting. The level of detail and research you did for it is amazing, almost pro-level! It's been a while since the last time a read something this good, not to mention the way you portray Negan and the rest of the Sanctuary, bravo author! Endless kudos to you.
It's such a shame I found this now, I would have loved to review before this went on hiatus. But let me just tell you something: thank you. I had a blast reading Mouse Hunt. If you ever decide to go back to this treasure, I'll be there to continue the ride XD Take care!

I don't think I possess the vocabulary to properly express how well written this story is. You have a true gift for storytelling. I hope you are able to reconnect with your muse at some point to finish this. If you don't, please comfort yourself with the fact that I may choose you to haunt when I die in the hope that I can scare you into finishing it. I'm pretty sure that's how haunting works.

I really enjoy how you've managed to capture Negan and his relationship with the wives without glorifying it! I hope you get some more inspiration and update this soon, it's an amazing story and Sam it's an interesting and complex character

This is just the best fanfic I have ever read about Negan. Ever. Seriously. I am not an English speaker, so I think that I cannot show you my impresion by using words.
The way you develop the characters is simply amazing. You show us the real Negan, a Negan with cruelty, sadness, enyjoyment...a human Negan, not just a sex machine.
Sam is incredibly human too. She doesn't fall in love with him immediatly. She started feeling something because of the way Negan show her that she is important to him (the first person that tells her that). She is rational, intelligent, difficult... She is all that Negan really needs and, at the end, adore.

Just my thinking, and a way to tell you that YOU ARE AN ARTIST! Really. This is just awesome. I write sometimes (not as good as you) and I know that writting is difficult and sometimes people enjoy your writting in the shadows without making a review (I used to be one of those) but talent should be appreciated. I hope you can continue this story until an end (OR A KISS!). Be sure I will be checking.

Thank you SO MUCH for this great time reading.

Great story, I can't wait to read more. I really like Sam, you made her special and different but in a believable way.

Love this please continue!

Such a great story. Please update soon.

I freaking love this story, sams flaws and issues make her different and anything but a Mary Sue. She capable but incapable at the same time, she has her strengths and definitely weaknesses. She’s a wonderful character people can relate to. I really hope you post more soon. Also I agree on your take with the wives. I hate those sappy stories they get in the show. Like for some reason they need a reason to be innocent, and yes amber looks like a minor, I hate it.
Your story is amazing.

I love sams character so much

You are an incredible writer! I love this story! I'm actually learning things from this. Lol.

One of my favorite Negan fanfics ever!️️️️

Great to see this chapter posted the fic updated.

Also great to read it with the beta hat off.

My favourite scene still stands at the closing of the chapter, tender but something still martial about it, marking a shifting between Negan and Sam and who is really conquering who.

Loooove

Ohhh, now I know why I’m getting notifications for this story. My mistake.

Why do I keep getting notifications from this story when it’s not updated yet? It’s so weird.