great fanfic, congratulations you write very well.
I liked very much. And I would like you to continue. Please

Oh, this was fluffy and adorable! I think you wrote them very sweetly.

I would say that the only thing would be about Manolo and Maria. Correct me if I'm wrong, but wasn't that story long ago? Like in the past and the museum kids filed trip taking place in modern New York City?

loving it

Aww what a great story this was great please make more stories:)

I LOVE IT! Pls make more of it and make some chapters longer!

This couple is so adorable. I would love to see a movie with just them - their past (meeting, falling in love, etc) all before the events that happened in The Book of Life movie. I felt the same way when I first watched the movie. I rented it first wondering why I didn't see it when it first came out because after watching it the first time, I loved it!

The above is my Pen Name on here. I am on mobile right now and can't sign in, but I will later to add this to my favorites. :)

I LOVE The Book of Life! That movie is a classic! You did a fantastic job on the story, Amiga! :D