So… been a while since I last visited "Tangled Webs". Been what, 2 years since it was last published?

Quick favour, if you’re really done with your story (or if you don't plan on writing Gwen's POV anytime soon), do you mind updating it as ‘Status: Complete’? It’s been bugging my friend when he searches through the archives for a good story or two and he comes across an old one that’s already saved in his alerts/favourites.

Really appreciate if you spare about 5 minutes of your time to deal with this.

Come on, it’s Christmas. We all have these little things we want to take care of before we start the new year fresh… think it over.

Spider-Man (Peter)X Spider Gwen ship died when MilesXGwen appeared it's kinda nice to see something like this

I really enjoyed this story, and it was very nice to see it presented very much from Peter’s point of view; it really added a lot of personality to the story, and a lot of fun quips when it comes to his experiences in Earth-65.

I would love to see a version from Gwen’s point of view to see her personality on full display, if that’s still something you have on your mind, but in any case, I’m excited to read more of your stories!

Critical Errors Spotted:
* The gravitational pull alone would {render} it nothing more than the doodlings of a bad science fiction writer.
* He tries to do what he does best: Save as many people {as} he can.
* He doesn't know what happens between Cap and Iron Man, [...] and it {doesn't seem} like either side managed to reach a conclusion.
* Some say the Fantastic 4 did it like they saved the earth from Galactus (he would've helped, but Scorpion attacked him that [day);] [...]
* 'Is {Kingsley} starting up the racket again?'
* The new Superhero looks down at the incapacitated criminal and tilts her {head}, [...]
* {She looks} up and waves when she spots him, "Hey."
* The Captain Stacy he remembers was tall and lean, a friendly smile on his face that {reminds} him of his Uncle Ben.
* "Sorry for the {interruption}, but I just wanted to thank you for your work. [...]
* He doesn't know if she realizes the mistake she makes in saying her {bandmate’s} name, [...]
* He doesn't know what he expects when she sees it, but her mouth parts open before she shakes her {head}, [...]
* They go back to his place {in lieu} of anywhere else.

I am ecstatic to find a story that focuses on both Peter Parker as ‘Spider-Man’ and Gwen Stacy as ‘Spider-Woman’. Not many stories explore this kind of ‘pairing’ and I’m glad yours are one of those that say otherwise.

My favorite comedic moment would probably be Peter stumbling across a dimension where Jonah becomes president of mankind, and having nightmares about it for months.

To be honest, I’ve stopped reading comics on my favorite superhero for years (don’t judge me; I was barely a teenager, lost interest in buying more comics and my house wasn’t meant to be a library) - coming back to ‘discover’ (and read up on) new story arcs such as ‘Spider-Verse’ and ‘The Superior Spider-Man’ had left me too scared to continue from where I left off, knowing what ‘Nightmare Fuel’/‘Tear Jerker’ were to happen...

I just wanted to say that I really loved reading this, I love the concept of it and you wrote it beautifully. Please do continue this.

A sequel would be nice

As you said, the hook-up at the end was rushed, but overall the story was good, has potential and you could make something more interesting with the premise.

Peter(616) and Spider-Gwen makes a good a pair and the 10 year gap it's not a big deal, I have dated women 10 years younger than myself and it's not a big deal, very funny conversations that's for sure. What I'm trying to say it's that it would be nice to read more about this pair.

Take care and great job with this one.

Eh, sorry. I found I wasn't as interested in this as I thought I would be. Maybe it's the sudden hook-up towards the end. I actually thought your previous attempts at romance were pretty good...for a certain definition. It seems you do better when the relationships are rough around the edges.

I also felt there was too much focus on the world-merging. And both Peter and Gwen being the only ones seemingly aware of the merging afterwards kinda killed it for me...I was thinking it would be an interesting plot twist if a villain kept his memories and used them to his advantage though.

Anyway, thanks for the read!

Cute. But like you said, romance isn't part of your forte, yet. You could continue this story for Gwen's pic since you have experience with her but that's up to you.

It's definatly good enough for a sequel/continuation.

Thanks

CM

Veran Good! more please!

You could have done Peter from the ultimate universe
He never actually died he came back to life and he left miles as the new spider man and left with mj

Thursday June 21, 2017.

This was very interesting and heartwarming.

Really good you should continue.