Will you be continuing the story soon

Oh. I wish there was more ready right no, but I see your updating a story from a universe I really don't know. Either way thanks for the share and I hope to see this continued.

All I have to say is AMAZING

Glenda and Jaune? Yes, please!

A good spin on the rwby universe, canon with a hint of deviation very good stuff

Excellent chapter and the first one for me when I finally saw Jaune for the leader he is supposed to be, even if he remains human and may need a little help sometimes (Ozpin's in this case).

Really liked everything about this one and nothing to critize at all. So looking forward to the Spiral now :)
And of course more stories from you sounds always good, even if I'm not sure posting different RWBY stories before continuing with this one... Still that's up to as an author and of course you must follow your muse :)
Amazing job so far!

For some reason I have little issue trying to imagine Nora as a caveman (cavewoman?) with her pretty much carrying Ren away :-D Also Ren should start to work on his endurance, he is gonna need it :-D

Anyway, good chapter. Enjoyed both conversation between Jaune & Ruby and Jaune & Pyrrha.
Maybe little surprised how much is Weiss acting out now that she got a boyfriend (or that she have him in the first place) but I guess Neptune is passable for that job (as long as he stand and does nothing at least :-D )

Orange motorcycle and scythe wielder? Where ever did I heard about something like that before :-D
Say what you want about Ozpin but he got his moments and they're awesome.

Umm, wasn't Sun and Blake the two FAUNUS infiltrating? Guess Sun and Neptune are better at avoiding not only Ozpin notice but even going so far to as to wipe their and rest of the gang memories of at least Sun ever being there! Shame they didn't get me, ha! Um, could you wait for a bit? There are some gentlemans in suits at my door wearing dark sunglasses for some reason...

About the dance, well done! Bet Jaune is now not complaining about the forced lessons his sisters used him for :-D
And of course Nora, I think we can sum up it up for her with "Instruction unclear" :-D She just tried a little too hard...

Also regarding the mentioned song. I raise you Safety Dance by Men Without Hats (also nowadays known as Lannisters went dancing). I think it sums up this chapter nicely as well.

Well the new skill sure proved useful but I'm not sure if I imagine it correctly? It doesn't extend the aura past the shield, only supercharge the shield? How exactly does that protect him or his team behind him against bullets and ranged attack that can slip past his defense?
In this case I would love to see something like his aura not only supercharging his shield but actually making it grow bigger (material shield at the center, the rest being created by aura) which would make more sense and even looks awesome :-D Even if it would give away his plan a little more than it does currently.

On the other hand that was one of the weirdest get together talk I ever saw. Pyrrha sure is dedicated to go through this with pretty much no issue :-D

Also I'm not sure if Jaune is tested enough for other (Yang and Pyrrha mostly) to sing praises upon his ability to lead. He got some ideas that are useful and such but honestly this chapter felt like first time when he did something that would really warrant it.
Shouting down the White Fang already engaged in combat with their member injured? Well done.

Anyway while I got some minor issues with this chapter, overall it's definitely well done.

It's sort of "cute" for lack of better words how open Jaune is abotu some things. Guess he is still young and inexperienced.
On the other hand he handled Yang perfectly and that acting was worth of Oscar. My fear didn't even seems come to pass that Pyrrha would walk on them in a very bad moment.
Also these instinct Jaune! Would love to see seeing Yang face when she found out about Cinder :-D

Loved Jaune's speech to RWBY, especially Ruby's reaction. Everybody in the show is always in awe of her reason to fight and view of the world, while in reality it's incredibly childish and naive.

Woo Volume 2 is finished! Now onto Volume 3 which was definitely my favorite out of all(!) Yeah, sarcastic comment aside, I'm your own little AU of RWBY and how you're going through it by Volume. Of course, I'm also loving the Arkos coz Arkos is love and Jaune and Pyrrha deserve better. Anyways, great story and cannot wait to read your take on Volume 3

Hello, very good chapter and fight. Maybe Jaune's companions were too upset with him, but it maken sense. I can't wait to see the next story and whath will happen during the Vytal festival(hoping both Pyhrra and Arkos will survive) and i hope to see a lot of badass fights. Keep up the good work and see you alter.

P.s. your opinion about my theory on the grimms?

Fantastic work on this one. I especially like the fact that you're exploring the darker aspect of the breach that was never explored in the series. It ended too happily in season 2 considering that a major Grimm incursion would have certainly resulted in the death of a lot of people. I think you explored it very well in that aspect.

Looking forward to the next installment and those two RWBY stories you mentioned. Given the way you ended this story and the name of the next installment I can already tell it's going to be a ride.

This chapter really brought forward the darker side of this world. I never watched the anime so I'm not sure how dark it got, but I think it was a good choice to show this to the readers. It makes what the teams are doing feel more important and I think gives the real motivation.