Reviews for Second Chances
Guest chapter 24 . 8/23
I love this story and I hope you find inspiration to continue it :)
TheAuthorOfBooks chapter 24 . 8/13
Absolutely amazing. Probably one of the best docs I’ve ever red.
JackRussellsarethebest chapter 24 . 7/20
Oh my goodness I absolutely love this story! It is so much fun to read and I really hope you don’t abandon it and that there will be an update. It’s too good to let go of in my opinion!
Guest chapter 20 . 5/18
Qi'ra! Considering how Disney ends things between Han and Leia, I find Han/Qi'ra relationship much more appealing. At least they end things early without getting married, getting a son and still going separate ways. Any chance you can give Luke a love interest too? I would love to see how Anakin teaches Luke to flirt.
Guest chapter 20 . 5/18
For a moment I was scared that Padme would be concerned about the minivan and spoiled the mood when she first saw the SUV. Luckily, she allowed Anakin to spoil her. This chapter is fun!
Guest chapter 15 . 5/11
Anakin thinks like a Sith here and Padme likes to dress in red, the color of the Sith. Interesting.
Guest chapter 14 . 5/10
good sports, how about showing us Anakin/Junior vs Gray/Luke next time?
Guest chapter 1 . 4/18
Come on, please, would you upload new chapters is sooooo good
Thank you
Guest chapter 24 . 3/26
impressive, most impressive, so much so that the other day I caught myself daydreaming about Anakin losing himself in threesome on Padme's wedding night. Haha. Just saying I am quite invested in your story. It seems that Anakin hasn't matured enough to prevent fear from misleading him. I sense some drama ahead, which is great. With his family and friends around, he will triumph, eventually, and I am looking forward to see that day. As for Padme, I find that guilt helps to settle differences in a relationship. They would be a happily married couple since they appreciate each other so so much. If this can become a norm between men and women, there might not be Such a fervent battle of the sexes.
Guest chapter 1 . 3/18
Pleaseeeee finish it
I really love it!
Definitely-Beautiful chapter 10 . 3/4
I really do love this story. The plotline is so fantastic, and while I understand some people saying they think Padme got off too easy, I personally think it's in line with Anakin's love for Padme. Even if there's a Sith angle, no one can convince me that he wouldn't forgive her immediately if it meant he could still have a chance to be with her again. So far, it's been super exciting to read. My only critique is the *vast* amount of narration. I lost my place multiple times per chapter because there was so much character thoughts/narration in between the dialogue, I couldn't remember what has previously been done/said. Still, your writing is beautiful and your characters are likeable and endearing. It all just gets a little buried in the snow, is all.
Rando reader chapter 24 . 2/29
Please continue this story it's great and a lot of us would like to see it continued!
Guest chapter 1 . 2/21
Come on, can't wait till you upload another chapter
Guest chapter 1 . 2/21
Please finish it, it's sooooo good!
livy chapter 24 . 1/24
I love Star Wars mostly because it centers on family. I love the life attitude you give these characters. It really reminds me of the attitude I should adopt in order to mend my familial relationships. I look up to Padme and I would be super proud of myself if I am half as devoted as she is in this fiction. So thank you for sharing this with us. May the force be with you.
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