Oh God I almost puked at how disgustingly naive and how much of a doormat she is! She let's him walk all over her, he says I'm sorry she says i know and all is okay... blah!

I don't really like Dani with Embry, he is waiting his time with his romantic love for her, and intruding on her love life with Paul. Is a toxic romance, the friendship is good, but he can't separate both.
He deserve to find his own imprint and be loved. Could be Leah's child or Colin/Brad, some girls from the Makah people probably.

Well, i love your writing, hope to read more soon!

I’m sorry Jared but it is kinda sick that they are happen that the mom is probably going to die. I mean really they could find another way to make him phase then death.

Sending good vibes your way! Great update looking forward to the next one.

I get so excited when I see an update! Love love love this story

Geez teenagers are freakin dumb and mean

I loveeeeeeeeeeeeee this story so much

update soon please :)

oh wow so much has happened so curious to find out more

Love it

I cannot express how amazing this story is! I love how you changed the original story to fit your characters and you still kept them in character. Not a lot of authors do that and it's refreshing to see a change. I absolutely love Dani and Paul's relationship! They are so adorable! I love how possessive and protective he has always been of her even when they were kids. I'm worried about Leah and Quil's relationship. Like if he shifts and doesn't imprint on her what's gonna happen between her, Quil, and Sam? I love that Quil and Leah are together but I dont want them to get hurt more than they already have. Embry and Dani worry me too. Like what is going on with their relationship? I personally am all for Paul and Dani so I dont know what to say about her and Embry. I also love how you're not bashing on Bella like most fics do. I mean I'm not the biggest fan of her, but I do like her especially in the books she's a lot better than the movies portray her to be. Final thing, Leah? I love that you're giving her justice! What happened to her was so shitty. Thanks so much for writing this story and sharing it! I can't wait to see what happens next!

the amount of information about the makah and quilette tribes was awesome, I cant wait to. see how the meeting with makah goes, also I cant wait to learn about dani/paul/embry connection

The length of chapters will never be a problem haha, I’m glad you got moved out of college. I remember doing that and it’s a ton of work! I know you have a ton of school work to do but please don’t forget to take care of yourself and take the time you need to relax once in a while. It’s a stressful time for everyone and realizing you are going through tough feelings too is the first step to handling them well :) I realized today that this whole time is stressing me out more than I wanted to admit so please make sure to take care of yourself.

Loved! Definitely didn’t mind the length! Can’t wit for the next; glad you’re feeling a bit better girly :)

Oh hun- the world is certainly upside down- but you’re going to be okay, I promise. You’ve got amazing writing skills and creativity on your side. I hope you get settled and tackle those obnoxiously stressful ‘online’ courses with ease. One day at a time and when that gets too much- one hour at a time. You’re doing great and bravo on this chapter. Oh- and fuck that guy/gal for cheating on you- you’re better off without that kind of disloyalty in your life.