I’m surprised that the author hasn’t PMed me yet on my comment.

Not really. Caboose, help him out with the tank.
Caboose: Okay.
Immediately kills Tracy with the tank.
Tracy: SON OF A BITCH!
Thanks Caboose. We’ll just use the keyboard shortcut.
Caboose: Control-f-u.

really fanfic. with all kind of fight and emotions.
Really ash is the chosen is a hero
But now i am asking the question what mewtwo ask"why they all hate a kindhearted and self sarificing person (ash)?"
dude u r really amazing u give us a best story
did u know how my reaction (rage,sad,happy,romance,...) changes while reading each chapter

Please continue it is amazing

Ch 18 Report
I like, I mean I love Bulbasaur

Ch 13 Report
Why no Oshawott?!

The past tense of see is saw
Ex: I saw you earlier at the beach
Got it?

Technically, Darmanitan is a pure Fire type which is weak to a Ground type like Donphan, who can also use super-effective Rock type moves like Sandstorm. Nidoqueen is half weak and half super-effective against Grass types like Bayleef(Poison-Grass-Ground). I love Pokémon.

Don't always expect the typo to kick in. Also Bulbasaur (he is Ash's best bud next to Pikachu) and Oshawott (he was crying because he wanted to be caught) should be in the group that didn't betray Ash too. At the very least make them realize their mistakes and return to Ash.

this book is really good and I love the way you spread out who got what pokemon but I do see one gape actually its 30 gaps were did all the tauros go

Amazing but a extremely Sad story! some of the moments made me cry.

Again should've included the POVs of the Traitors, but still an awesome fic. I didn't expect Snivy to return to Ash. Total sucker punch there because she did abandon a trainer once before, so abandoning Ash for feeling he was weak and Pathetic wouldn't have surprised me.

This is a great betrayed Ash fic, but there is one important spice you were missing to make it absolutely perfect (and the chapters longer). The Points of View of the Traitors. I mean Human and Pokémon alike.

How could she?! How could Dawn so brutally torture a sensitive pokemon like Torkoal?! Getting her Trainer's License, contest ribbons, and Pokémon taken away would be too merciful.

Swellow doesn't get it Ash loves all is pokemon more than anything, even when he tenderly rases them from their base state.