So happy your back Em! And what an amazing finale! Can’t wait for the sequel!

What just happened?

Wow. *claps*

Looks like RJ is about to make a tough decision. Even as the battle goes on. At least Martin is with her.

Yikes, the mastermind behind everything is the son of the alien warlords, now that’s a twist! All so that he could avenge the death of his parents. I take it that next chapter is going to be him berating Kim about being so focused on the villains on Earth, that she didn’t think twice about the villains in space? Again, is there going to be a berating/mocking on how flawed the plan to hide RJ from the world actually was? Looking forward to the next chapter.

1010. Excellent fanfic. Keep up the good work!

One things clear, this bitch is crazy (and I’m talking about Ruba). When I look back to pass chapters, it’s amazing while Martin was making some kind of love potion for RJ to fall for him, he never really expected to actually fall in love with her. I’m praying Martin is okay. Looks like we are in for more drama/heartbreak in the next chapter.

I can’t believe RJ plans to turn herself in with the alien mercenaries. Even more shocking is that Ron is not the same person all those years ago. Fourteen years is a long time to be separated from your child, since it must have been painful to not see her grow up. Either way, he has every right to be angry because he knew from the start how foolish it was to keep her confined. As for Martin, he’s a little shocked after learning who RJ is, but at the same time he really does love her. Next chapter is going to be another world of hurt.

Knew this was coming. I always knew that Ron was totally against the idea of having RJ be confined. It’s nice to know that he stayed in Middleton as a way to make sure that Dr. Possible was properly taking care of her. I take it next chapter we are in for a lot of drama, that I’m at a point that I want to make a roast out of the confrontation. But I’ll reserved that for next time, since we are headed into a world of hurt.

Isn’t karma a bitch? You gotta love Fate for pulling the strings. My thoughts on prisoner: a complete and utter sociopath who was raised to become a bio weapon/assasian. Also, I kinda figured out that Pablo guy is actually Ron, doesn’t take a genius for putting all the pieces together when the answers were sort of right in front of you, but didn’t want to jump to conclusions. And on that note, we end with a cliffhanger.

It’s official, all hell has broken loose. Even more shocking is the fact that Drakken and Shego knew about RJ this whole time. When this is over, everyone will be needing therapy. Can’t wait for the next update to come.

All right, the stakes have gotten higher! It won’t be long until the real fun is about to begin. My inner Road is secretly squealing with all the chaos that’s about to happen, it makes it even more fun.

By now RJ has figured out who her father is, or thinks he is. Anyway, I have a clear guess on what the next chapter is heading, and it won’t be long until our mysterious antagonist is going to abduct RJ.

Looks like the pieces are coming together. It’s obvious to us the reader and Will that Kim really didn’t think this through in terms of contact information. Here’s one thing that I found that I found very flawed in the House Arrest thing. She was so focused on the villains from Earrh, that she didn’t think twice about the ones from space. Thus resulting in mystery antagonist to take advantage of the situation. Looking forward to the confrontation drama, no doubt it’s going to be juicy.

RJ has unlocked another memory. I love Hana she’s adorable, it’s a shame she didn’t get much screen time in the previous story. I get the feeling that our mystery antagonist is waiting for the right time to strike, my guess is much sooner, but fingers crossed.

After looking over this chapter it’s nice to know that Ron was totally against RJ being confined in the penthouse for the next fourteen years. Heck, he was willing to take her with him, too bad Dr. Possible stopped him. Anyway, the theme of overprotectiveness that you interpret into the sequel has given me an idea on the price of overprotectivening your child for my own writing, that the thing itself or the actions of the person isn’t the problem, it’s how poorly the person takes the situation, resulting in more harm then good. Anyway, I love the board game scene, along with the fact that Martin plans to take RJ to London for her birthday. Can’t wait for more.