Thanks for the mayhem and romance. Fun!

What a loveable story! Thank you for a very entertaining and zany ride.

Please don’t hide, that was wonderful. I could see them on that kind of date. Definitely made me chuckle. Thank you for sharing it.

Lol, I'm not sure what I enjoyed more: the story or the amazing emojis!flips tablefollowed byflips goblincracked me up. Great job on the story too!

Is there even a way to express how much I love this ?

Loved the chicken jokes, and of course the last sentence just caps it all.

Good job!

It was great, although I'm a little disappointed where it ended, but I get it.

Here is a perfect example of the number one problem with one shots...you WISH they were longer! This was funny and charming and I really wish there were many many more chapters of it. Your writing is wonderful but you limit yourself to mostly one-shots, I would love to read some more stories of yours at a longer word count. Keep up the wonderful work!

Awww...that's so sweet! You didn't have to change it on my account. I just figured, if he truly cares for her, he would keep something she gave him, especially if it was something she made.

I love how sneaky Jareth was in getting her back to the castle - not telling her that he could clean up the house with magic. Did he send the goblins there to torment her, or did he merely take advantage of the situation? Either works.

I also love the kissing as she opened the door and dragged him inside part. Very romantic.

MORE, I want more. Plz. :)

Jareth is just too adorable. Got my heart fluttering ;; and a huge smile stuck on my face. I'm beginning to think he totally planned the goblins trashing her place... Then again it was to be expected. It's nice he fixed up her place in an instant. His response at the end is just adorable

This was wonderful~ at first i was confused by Sarah's distaste towards the cake topping but then it finally hit me when she got the bouquet. So many cute moments here and there but her cons really made me laugh because i had the same thoughts (alongside everyone that has seen the movie) Good job~!

Loved it! Great build up to them meeting again and great humor with the goblins and Jareth not wanting to admit he kept and loved the blanket she made him. :)

If this story is done then why is the word complete not on it?