I love it.

Plz update ASAP loving ur story

This is so awesome. The writing is as beautiful as always. The plot is moving on smoothly, like an extended part of Deathly Hallows. Thank you soooo much Lucinda for this wonderful chapter. Can't wait to read what happens next...

Aw Lucinda! I am here for you! *Spreads arms*
The chapter was nice again . The name for the charity sounds superb . I hope Harry only sends those DE (was a bit surprised that you used the abbreviation here) to and ok not to hell. It took me a while to remember who Audrey was ...so I was a bit confused at the beginning of the chapter(sorry sorry , I am getting very rusty) Hope Harry & Co. Make those Death Eaters pay well! Waiting for the next installment.

The story is good but the chapter was too short to be satisfying considering the delay. I hope you will update soon with longer chapters

Another great chapter by a great Author! Poor Teddy and Andy! I wish they do not have to grieve for Teddy now. Are you going to keel this completely canon? You better keep it that way or we will cry our hearts out! I hope hou are not one of those cruel authors who make us cry! When is the next one coming girl?

Short yet nice. Neville and Luna will be a good pair.
(Don't change your name please coz Lucy is a sweet name.)

More please. Can you include more of Ron and medicine's thoughts about what had happened? You have done a great job.

Hi! It was a very concise and lovely speech but I can’t imagine it different. After all, they were exhausted and they were very young. Please continue this story, I’m totally addicted to it

great job

Dear Lucinda/Deepika,
I’ve love this fic since I started to read it. I found it fresh and well developed. I’m very interested to read what is gonna say Harry in his speech I hope he could describe a little more how Snape died as a hero.
The first chapter when Harry talked to the Death was awesome and the attack at Dursley’s was thrilling.
My husband wants me to tell you that he is impressed on how good is your writing being so young, he said that sometimes he feels that JKR continued to write the story (what a complement right?). Hoping to read you soon I leave you with a big THANKS

Review for chp. 12 :
"Death is but crossing the world, as friends do the seas; they live in one another still. For they must be present, that love and life in that which is omnipresent. In this divine glass they see face to face; and their converse is free, as well as pure. This is the comfort of friends that though they may be said to die, yet their friendship and society are, in the best sense, ever present, because they are immortal.*"
Woman you will kill me with such good writing qualities. These lines are just soo touching.
And about Harry's speech ( I cant give you any suggestions as I am not a good thinker) ...were the words "What the Hell did I get myself into?!" ... signifying your dilemma with the speech? I mean what will you make harry say?

Review for chp.11 :
Nice but a long chapter by your usual standards.
I dont know if its made clear by Jo but I think Audrey worked at the ministry with Percy and there they met each other...I don't know that you made Audrey a reporter for a purpose or just randomly picked a job for her.
And woman..you gave me goosebumps with the last sentence...and you say you wont break the suspense until later in the story...You'll kill me with such suspense...Is that person a supporter of thrme dark side... does he/she mean Harry harm...or is it someone who's just jealous or either harry or ginny being with each other...or someone who is their friend...man i cant wait...

Beautiful and cute chapter _
(But why that suspense at the end?! You are soo evil!)

No need to be sorry. Readers sometimes need short chapters. The magical core theory seems interesting.