Reviews for Obscure the Waters
EMR-one7 chapter 1 . 4/9
Been revisiting old stories recently and I’m glad I stumbled back onto this one. I like how the characters feel so very real in this storyreal emotions, real desires, etc. It makes it feel like a fluid transition from the actual series to this one shotsomething I wish I felt like the actual series did lol. In any case, great job!
Inthewoodssomewhere chapter 1 . 7/18/2019
Die bitch boy
Guest chapter 1 . 11/18/2018
Perfecto!
If u dunt liek me go KYS chapter 1 . 6/1/2018
eh?
Elsil chapter 1 . 4/28/2018
This was cute and fun, with a nice sprinkling of seriousness. I especially liked how you portrayed Naruto and Sai.

~Elsil
karinuuzumaki chapter 1 . 4/11/2018
When I portraying a good, solid, and beautiful NaruSaku post-war fic, THIS is what I'm talking about. It just break me down and build me up to a whole different level. I literally had to take break between reading just to take a deep breath and control my feelings; bcs, OH MY GOD THE EMOTIONS. I feel so emotional throughout the story! Your story, sweet baby Jesus, is magnificent. It is everything that I've always been waiting for so long. It has full canon background, mature (and perfect) characterization, clever conversation, solid plot and description. Seriously, this is hands down my favorite NaruSaku ff. Ever! It keeps thrilling till the end and I'm so happy that Sakura made up her mind. I love the prolog with the Ino's wedding and we get the portrayal of how beautiful their friendship can be; then it is keep moving into how beautiful their romance can be. Oh my. I am kinda lost my words by now. Still shaking and shivering from emotionsI just want to say thank you, thank you so much for all of your efforts for writing this story. Thank you so much for realising my dream fanfiction of NaruSaku's. Please never stop to write some more! I certainly will wait for your next works!
Regards,
Karin
MindForgedMan chapter 1 . 1/23/2018
A nice one-shot.
hennessyswagg83 chapter 1 . 10/26/2017
I wonder if she ever realize that it was Naruto that complimented her on the bench after team assignments yet
hennessyswagg83 chapter 1 . 10/26/2017
This story was alright but I can say this is how cannon should've went didn't like how Naruto basically give up on his love for Sakura to Sasauke I mean has anyone paid close attention to her relationship with Sasuke in Boruto he doesn't show any REAL attention to her and I seen a episode where she says something bout waiting 21 years for something to stomps back into the village
Elarmi chapter 1 . 9/8/2017
Really sweet story
wubbzy chapter 1 . 7/1/2017
Gah, I absolutely love your writing! It's so refreshing to see new NaruSaku oneshots and stories here! :) That makes me so happy, and this one was so good. I absolutely love your writing.

I also loved the premise, and honestly wasn't what I expected.

I honestly don't have much to say about this story, it was just really well done. Your writing was pretty spot on. No errors, great prose, great descriptions that I enjoyed imaging what was going on. :) I enjoyed the characterization and I loved everyone else (including Ino and Sai haha). The only thing I can think of, is that I wish there was more haha. I would love to see what happens afterwards.

Overall, this was incredibly sweet. :) I very much enjoyed this. And I am happy to hear that there will be more of these in the future. :)
Guest chapter 1 . 6/30/2017
Thanks .its so lovely. Eventhough i am a narusaku shikaino fan. This story is superb
Kimiss chapter 1 . 6/29/2017
Oh my got! This was such a wonderfully constructed and beautiful one shot! Thank you! Thank you! You rock!
DeathCheater chapter 1 . 6/29/2017
holy motherfkajsnxidoeldi... its been a while to see something like this. damn son, i like this idea so bad. if kishi go all out about romance, this things should happen, not somekind of rushing plot twist. i deep in thought for how every pannel should be drawn. there is no holes, completely flawless. yes, the romance i seek in naruto kinda disappoint me because it only came out in the of the series. this fiction fill the gap right in front of the last, while it is quite AU. now, you really made my day about going all out on narusaku. this is how its work, this is how it should be. i shall wait for another writings from you, dear author!
Guest chapter 1 . 6/28/2017
Thus is what I've been looking for
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