Reviews for Watch Boy & Lucky Girl
Jaspers Lalonde chapter 4 . 11/1/2019
Hmmm... Ben saying he's in love with Lucky Girl reminds me of Leafa and Kirito honestly.
Guest chapter 1 . 8/4/2019
We need updates. Don’t abandon it like cn did with teen Titans

Author's reply:
Thank you very much. By the way, I did start a sequel to it (the sequel is on hiatus though) s/13122560/
I've been thinking of this story too, and reviews like yours help a lot to motivate me to get back to it. Thanks again!
donovandelaney26101 chapter 16 . 5/3/2019
Ben has a natural Anodite form. Ben would not always have to use the Omnitrix to become one! Ben can even use the Omnitrix to become Gwen or Hope.
NHarem Foreva chapter 29 . 1/12/2019
I can’t find Magic vanguard :/
John2851 chapter 3 . 12/22/2018
This is a great hero action between the two and I for one can't wait to read more!.
WebofSpideyguy7245698 chapter 28 . 12/20/2018
Great chapter! I'm kinda worried for Ben's parents. I have to say, I was surprised how Gwen just appeared at Ben's house and told him that she wanted to sleep with him. And I was actually surprised to feel happy that he refused her advances and talked her down, making her realize that's not really what she wanted. As for Ben and Gwen's plan, I guess we'll see how this goes.
Great chapter!
WebofSpideyguy7245698 chapter 27 . 12/19/2018
Ouch, poor Charmcaster. I won't say that she didn't have this coming after using the Luck Charm. I feel like she's going to go down the villain's path at this point. And I also feel like if she crosses paths with Ben and Gwen, she'd be nice to Ben or would try to, since she loved him, but I'd see her making an attempt to harm or even kill Gwen.
Good chapter! I'm glad to be caught up!
WebofSpideyguy7245698 chapter 26 . 12/19/2018
Okay, I'm pretty sure I'm finally done rereading. It was pretty fun rereading the chapters and recognizing stuff I'd already read and then seeing stuff that I didn't recall happening.
I was pretty sure that Hex had smiled about something at the end the first time I read this and now I remember what the reason was.
WebofSpideyguy7245698 chapter 25 . 12/19/2018
Now that I've been through this chapter again, I don't know why, but I thought the dream went differently when I first read this chapter.
WebofSpideyguy7245698 chapter 24 . 12/19/2018
I don't remember much of this chapter's ending here. I do however remember Ben's jealousy to Natan's affection towards Gwen, so I know I've read this one before.
WebofSpideyguy7245698 chapter 23 . 12/19/2018
Okay, now I see I read this chapter before. I remember reading this chapter's ending back in February. I'm starting to remember now that you rebooted the story a little bit, because of fan complaints to Ben's joint relationship with Gwen and Charmcaster?
And you decided to split the two relationships and explore them in two different stories, is that right? Maybe I'm missing something. But now that's clear, rereading and catching back up should be a breeze!
WebofSpideyguy7245698 chapter 22 . 12/19/2018
Sorry for taking so long to get back to this story. This was a good chapter. The beginning of the chapter with Ben and Gwen being scolded by Gwen's parents seemed vaguely familiar, so I may have read this chapter before. I'm honestly not sure, though.
I don't recall Charmcaster drugging Ben, so who knows, maybe this is my first time reading this chapter. I'm somehow convinced that Frank will be fine. I couldn't see him being killed off the story. Good chapter!
Junior VB chapter 16 . 12/18/2018
Me alegra que Ben esté bien.
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I'm glad Ben is okay.
Junior VB chapter 15 . 12/18/2018
¿Entonces Hex es el abuelo de Gwen?
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So Hex is Gwen's grandfather?
Junior VB chapter 14 . 12/18/2018
Espero que Gwen y Charmcaster aprendan a llevarse bien.

Albedo y Sunny son un peligroso dúo.
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I hope Gwen and Charmcaster learn to get along.

Albedo and Sunny are a dangerous duo.
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