You know this was really well-written, like really nicely! Hopefully this could be a chapter story? Like a tradegy? Perhaps something bad could happen? That would be really cool. This could be a prologue :p it's really nice. If it's not going to, then I'll just say this one shot was awesome. 9/10 I won't say it's perfect, I just don't want to exaggerate and I hope I didn't offend you : it's really a sincere opinion and what I think. I don't know why a 9/10 but that's what I felt so, yep! Just my opinion.