Such a great story! You wrote it beautifully and masterfully. You my good man are a fantastic writer! Keep writing great stories like this one in the future. Cheers!

A great chapter to fap

I've seen that people really like the Hex Maniac, yet I've never exactly cared for her, but this story may have changed that. The way you managed to describe her creepy and controlling aura, giving us the first person perspective, and how you wrote her dialogue and actions all lead to a satisfying story that continued to get better right up until the end.

The dark magic, owner-pet relationship definitely made this even better and suits the Hex Maniac almost too well.

I certainly think you've done well with this one. And as the first review says, 10/10.

10/10