Reviews for Shambles |
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ConverseLaces chapter 29 . 4/4 Welp. Took me about 3 days and an all nighter but I finished the story. I think the fact that I pulled an all nighter in itself is a testament to amazing writing, plot, and characterization. A slightly bittersweet ending but also fittingthank you for this incredible story! |
ButterflyAlley chapter 29 . 3/8 I just read this story again and still love it. It’s so three dimensional and I love the character arch. |
Emerald Gaze chapter 29 . 7/21/2019 This was a really great story. I really liked how you handled Law's character and his relationship and how he interacted with people. I don't think I've ever seen a story where the main characters were in an open relationship but you handled it really well, it fit with the characters and their situation and just made sense in a world of pirates. I like how Law's promise not to hurt Spade wasn't enough to convince her in the fight against Mingo and that Ace got to intervene through Sabo to get to her. I especially liked how in that moment, Law essentially took the doctor's oath to do no harm for her even when he'd tossed that aside a long time ago. And that they both got to be a support system to each other as the only 2 people that could 100% understand what the other had been through with Mingo. It was also really cute that Bepo's found a love interest. I hope things work out for him eventually. Good job with this. You're a really good writer and this has been the best Law fic I've ever read. |
Emerald Gaze chapter 4 . 7/20/2019 Technically, she still didn't introduce herself properly... I wonder if they'll ever get to that point or if their future interactions will only ever just be the sharing of more intimate moments. |
Emerald Gaze chapter 1 . 7/19/2019 I really liked this first chapter. it managed to explain a lot without feeling like just an info dump. you used conversation and flashbacks well to show how Spade fit into the existing story. Also I love what you did with her name, Ace of Spades, that's such a good pairing name for them. I'm looking forward to seeing how she reacts to Law when she actually gets to meet/know him. |
Anotherbricinthewall chapter 1 . 7/3/2019 I would love to see a short prequel (seeing law and spade again when the completed their life mission would be so amazing). |
Anotherbricinthewall chapter 1 . 7/3/2019 This is the best FanFiction I ever read in my entire life. I nearly finished in one night because it was so breathtaking. Thanks you |
Fahdza chapter 13 . 4/21/2019 Oh ssshhhiitt |
ButterflyAlley chapter 29 . 2/18/2019 This was amazing! I have been reading so quickly that this story became my life very easily. It was so detailed that I saw everything so clearly. Your characters were so dimensional they were real. Thank you so much for writing this! It was incredible! |
stranger-in-my-eyes chapter 29 . 2/7/2019 Love! Love! Love! A billion Belly times love for this story! I love your characterization of Law. Spade is freaking amazing also. Thank you for writing! |
Coolfire30 chapter 29 . 12/3/2018 ... Next time I see you, I'll be you're king... I SCREAMED. You have no fucking idea how much I cried. My chest went damn tight when I read that line... Fuck... I love this story so much. I loved the alternative Ace story too. Fuck. Fuck. Oh my dear lord, can I just say... You're a fucking amazing writer? |
Coolfire30 chapter 24 . 12/3/2018 I'm actually... Scared?... At how easily they both fell back into that... Routine? Mindset? Vulnerability that they shared a few chapters ago before it all?... It just sort of... Unsettles me a bit but... I guess that's just my sadistic side rearing it's head again... I just want them to be more... Angry, aggressive, violent... But it's okay. |
Coolfire30 chapter 6 . 12/2/2018 Ahhhhhhhh... Fuck... That little tidbit bit Ace and the origins and meaning of that particular tattoo... It's damn heart wrenchingly beautiful and cute... But also fucking horrible. I love it. |
Coolfire30 chapter 4 . 12/2/2018 Hoooolllyyyyy fuck... That was so damn intimate I cried... Why the fuck am I so emotional today! Is it hormones! AM I PMSing! ! ! But... In all seriousness... I am so completely and utterly hooked. |
Coolfire30 chapter 10 . 12/2/2018 ... *laughs uncontrollably*... I feel so happy for this new development but... Weirdly so betrayed at the same time... What the shit is tho? |