They accidentally broke the 4th wall. Too bad they're not Chuck Norris.

Overall a nice story, with a few issues. One, pacing is all over the place. Sometimes it's well paced, sometimes things feel rushed. Which is your own laziness, as you have admitted. There is how Ochaco was handled, which while I understand this is fanfiction, I do feel she should have been handled more realistically, instead of as a pseudo yandere. Lastly, the ending. Highly unsatisfying and abrupt. Many things have been left out, such as meeting the Hatsumeis as you mentioned. It just feels like a passionless, fuck it I'm done, ending. So while this was a nice little read, I don't believe I will be returning to it, or really suggesting it.

It's funny how I'm always so good at critiquing and editing yet when it comes to my own work it always feels like trash... hmm...

Ok, look. Izuku is timid, but he does have a backbone when it counts. We've seen this numerous times. He won't just stick to a relationship with someone like Uraraka when she's so fucking obviously toxic in this fic. And the fact that no one has tried to say anything for a week, fucking hell. If any of my friends allowed me to stay in such a bad relationship without trying to do anything, I'd stop being their friend.

I feel the "pussy way out" is instead of addressing the drama and problems, you just had Izuku agree to a date and end the chapter. Cmon now.

By god this is an amazing story pls write more like it.

Nakamura should have broken the fourth wall since he can see past lives witch would also tie into real life if you think about something like the butterfly effect.

MORE CHAPTERS PLEASE or just add a bonus chapter or 2

Make a post marriage series please

Yeah, I'm sorry but I can't read any more. Even my best breakups, where we both mutually felt like we needed to separate, never went that smoothly. They certainly never suggested i be with another girl. This may be fiction but it should still feel real to a point. The while story send to have dive bombed in quality since Ochako started dating Izuku.

No offense, but All Might suggesting Izuku date Mei felt forced and severely OOC. Not to mention that he is a teacher. I know this is fanfiction but it still seems wrong.

great

Interesting

still need more of this amazing-ness

very good!:D

mofo u can't just go creating a crap ton of OCs. You must realize that hardcore fans, such as myself, hate it when someone adds new characters. We are fine with you changing the way they feel and romantic interests, but do not EVER go giving Midoriya the ability to breath fire or some other quirk.