Started reading this, and I gotta say it's pretty cool. Do you think he would have abilities similar to Noob Saibot or Zed from League of Legends?

So you've probably gotten this before, but your summary is lowkey really sexist. 'Behind every Queen is a King who is the undisputable ruler' is just bad no matter how you wanna slice it. I get that this is about said King and by using a line like that you're establishing his power by comparing him to Salem, but still, it's just yikes.

Shay d man, I’m going to admit, that was just beautiful

I’m so happy this story got an update. Jaune being able to make his own creatures is so cool, it has given me so many ideas of things he could make.

Creature one, a big cat like a tiger but with two arms on it's back that end in spears, like Zerglings from StarCraft. They can climb trees and walls with their cat claws and they can attack with their spear arms while running around an enemy. The spear may be more of a harpoon, a pointed tip with a blade leading to a hook. The hook can be used to hold on or tear things off when its claws aren’t enough. Their special ability is bleeding acid so if a Grimm tries to eat them acid will go in its mouth and it will let the Jaune Spawn go. If a hunter cuts them while they are running at the hunter then the blood will spray over the hunter burning them. I would give them fur so they can roll around in the dirt (more dog than cat but whatever) to help with camouflage. It wouldn’t be as good as having an ability to change color but if they can get grass and dirt stains to blend into the forest it’s better than nothing. Sand colored in desserts and white colored in snow. They can even smash up some concrete to be gray colored in places like Mountain Glenn. Should move in packs, bigger than a Grimm Creep.

#2. A small snake that can burrow into people’s necks and take control of their bodies, basically like the Goa'uld from StarGate. Jaune is a known person and people will recognise his face so he needs someone to act in his stead.

#3. A praying mantis well armored the size of an Ursa but with four legs it shouldn’t be slow and can attack while moving. Its arms can be used to shield it’s head while being able to jab forward at a moment’s notice. Maybe another set of arms on the side of its body and maybe it can pick up chunks of the ground then past it to an arm and throw it. Don’t know what ability it should have though, maybe regeneration so it can re-grow limbs stupidly fast.

#4. A tunnelling creature, I don’t know what its main body should be but tentacles will come off it. The main body will stay underground all the time where most hunters and Grimm can’t get it. The tentacles will come up from underground and attack enemies or hold them so others can attack. If its tentacles get cut off it can just retreat more underground and re-grow them, no long term harm done. Its ability can be to make vibrations to loosen soil to make it easier to move through and to temporarily make quicksand or quick dirt or snow? Whatever, to trap enemies in the ground.

#5. An armadillo that can shoot spikes, not enough ground Grimm have ranged attacks. I don’t know how big it would be but it would be well armored so it can tank long range shots and if something gets close it can just curl up into a ball and roll away. It can have trunks on it’s sides that shoot the spikes so it can shoot while rolling.

#6 A dragonfly with the body the size of a house cat that has a long tongue that it can shoot out to grab things. The small ones can grab hunters’ weapons away from them and trip Grimm. Bigger ones can pull hunters or Grimm out of formations.
Can Jaune’s creatures grow bigger? If they do, can Jaune make it so they can eat to grow faster, like eat grass or something or better yet Grimm? Make most of them small and let them grow.

A king needs an army after all.

Interesting ztory but i think its best you keep the story cast and love interest especially smaller...just pryhha and at mostruby will do... i really dontlike the direction of hypocrite blake and while weiss is anmoying and i can see she is a victim of her circumstances...yang is just unpractical for jaune to fall for her...just doesnt feel organic if compare to his to pryhha and ruby interaction...his and jnpr however should be expended...nora and ren i think are integral part of who jaune is and his characteristic since he feel responsible for his team and the strategy he made for them which i imagine put him in the most dangerous places and allow the. To escape...be nice if jayne upon seeing them 4 help make a coherent strategy book and left it to ren and nora instead of the rest ...cause he cant risk ruby relapsing and using her silver eye and nor he think he can face pryhha with so many conflicting info...can be he hopw to sneak away but discovered by nore or ren...who both are unexpectedly can be very perceptive and i belive nora is actually ontelligent by looking at her grenade launcher hammer and her boom boom interest

Awesome chapter.

So glad you are updating your RWBY works again. I have a feeling Alexander Anderson, or something similar to him, will be coming out of Section 13 very soon.

Think Jaune’s blood can resurrect Summer? Like Dracula did with his son?

So glad that ur back writing ur stories. I hope you update knight if the fallen order, restart, and legend of the white wolf soon because I like those stories the most.

REEEEEEEEEEEEEEE, I want more goddang I should've waited more so that I can stack up more chapters to read.

are you EVER going to CONTINUE the remnant knight?

Thx for the update. Good to know you haven't forgotten about this story.

So Qrow will go to convince Jaune to fight against Salem?
Well, that won't be hard, considering that was the original promise Jaune had to make when he made the deal.
I hope you plan to make it a bit hilarious, like Qrow goin on and on about how Jaune could save all of Remnant by killing Salem and that James could give him a full pardon if he did, ect. Then Jaune just way "Okay, sure. I was gonna do that anyway".

Blood Ravens, actually a very fitting name to Jaune's new informants. It's just that I played Warhammer 40k Dawn of War a lot, and all I can imagine after reading the name is a group of Space Marines in red armor who are very, VERY pissed that "minions of a foul sorcerer" has the "sacred" name of their Chapter.

Keep up the good work and stay healthy on your end.

You may have started it earlier, but I am getting vibes from another fic, a Halo crossover to be exact on Jaune's journey, except he won' t be as robotic as the protagonist there.

Looking forward to the next chapter

Love this story so much.

I honestly forgot this story existed. While I’m glad Jaune’s friends are on his trail, I hope you don’t have Jaune work with Ozpin. Ozpin is, in all honesty, a terrible person. His lies and manipulations have lead to the deaths of possibly millions of people. This entire war was started because he couldn’t be upfront with his wife and just talk to her. Would it have worked? Who knows, but I’d bet the answer is yes, but what did he do? Backstab the woman that loved him by try to kidnap her children. A woman that went above and beyond to bring him back to life(whose punishment was bullshit). She suffered countless years alone before and after his death. What did he think was going to happen?! Sorry about that. Went off on a tangent. Anyways, Ozpin is a piece of shit and I feel so sorry for Oscar having to carry Ozpin’s sins as if they were his own.

As for Jaune’s family, I’m glad they’re sticking by him. I hope we get to see him spend time with Saphron and Adrian soon.

I hope that next chapter the others get to see the GOOD Jaune has done. Like meeting Integra and the villagers that he saved and who are grateful to him. Everyone keeps freaking out that Jaune killed people, but they were bandits that have killed countless innocents, Who knows how many Grimm, the Wyvern, CINDER, and the soldier’s that shot first.

Also, fuck Ironwood, Glynda, and Qrow.