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Best Spider Man fanfiction ever! I'm gonna totally check out your other stories, cause you're an awesome author. I wish this story was a movie. You're the best writer ever

abroad isn't really the right word here if she's in ohio. From a teenager's perspective it might look like she's halfway across the country. I really like this.

a jumper is a sweater and a handbag is a purse, and in america we say uh not er. This is really easy to read, these are just tips. lol

Wow, that was a really nice ending :) Well done!

I LOVED IT!
Good job and keep up the good work!

last chapter "I cant fly like Tony or WANDA, if we fall, I die" and this chapter with Pete and WANDA "None of us can fly" öine whut

I love how you're using British terms like "bloke", even though they're American and American's don't say those things

that was awesome. i love it.

I'm astounded this has as many reviews as it does. There's so many plot holes and illogical actions and events that are clear even on first readings.

As soon as I read “eating a croissant” all I heard in my head was QUACKSON.

And your story was awesome

I loved Infinity War too but I can't talk about it like I spiraled for weeks

Hey, I just want to let you know how awesome your story was (although I hope you already know that!). From the story itself to your ability to keep the characters in character. Any other Spider-Man fanfiction I read will have to live up to your standards (because you spoiled me...). You should also know that I stayed up the entire night reading this in one go; I ended up working the entire day on 1 hour of sleep and thoughts of Spider-Man swinging around in my head. :-) Good job.

the big use for gamma radiation is high power lasers if you can make enough of it