Reviews for Life In The Grim Adventures Of Billy And Mandy
Existential ERROR chapter 8 . 12/8/2017
I'll admit: I have no idea what's going on.

it seems that you are somehow telling a story without telling her, chapter 8 and I still do not know much of the protagonist, the only things I know are that his parents abandoned him for some reason leaving him with his uncle, he is the heir of a martial arts style and that he is having an arranged marriage planned by his mother's clan that has not yet been said anything about and while we are talking about the marriage he is clearly showing no reaction about the fact that someone is marrying him without his permission, I understand that because he is a child people should not go telling them everything but if the uncle confides enough to take him to jobs that take at least a month to finish (I do not even think it was mentioned what he does) you will think that he will tell some things to the protagonist and speaking of him he is very passive for an adult in a body of a child again the arranged marriage should have had a reaction leading given his mental age and what he was talking about being a bodyguard? you are not explaining anything.

and I suggest you put in the end of each chapter which cartoon each character comes from, not everyone will know all the characters, seriously Ami come is an OC or comes from some cartoon?
Guest chapter 1 . 10/2/2017
Love the story and can't wait for your next update
JJsanoguel98 chapter 6 . 8/29/2017
You could look up snafu comics grim tales I bet you can get some awesome ideas for that
Godlegend chapter 8 . 8/26/2017
Hey man, I have gotta say, I like your fic a lot. There's not many good fic for this show out there, and it has been dead for 10 years so I doubt that will change any time soon. So you have no idea how much I appreciate this story and it's interesting ideas. Keep up the good work man!
coldblue chapter 8 . 8/24/2017
Thanks for updating and great chapter!

It okay if your working and the story is DELAYED a bit. Jobs are physically or mentally crushing in ways. Trying working with kids. They're a reason why teachers reason teachers looked depressed or drink a lot. Take a look at "The Grim Adventures of Billy and Mandy" teacher Ms. Eleanor Butterbean seems so lack lustered and corrupt.

Alex:

Well we are getting the "Kenchi the Mightiest Discipline" with Uncle Jaden facing off against a MASTER class opponent called Red Handed Killer. It very awesome. It seems that Ami skill set is showing with Bladed Weapons and observation of Jaden vs Red Handed Killer fight on they're fighting style. Is it weird that Jaden fighting style reminds me of "OnePunch-Man" character Bang martial art style- Water Stream Rock Smashing Fist style. With the twist and the turns. Anyway, it seems that the Ice Cream men started to act up and Alex was about to give a beat down. Then we have the Dark Hand from "Jackie Chan Adventures" own Shadowkhan ninjas stealing a POSSIBLE tailsmen or Mystical item. Alex was able to keep up with Shadowkhan and FIND them, so who knows what that means in the future. Alex might not be that strong as his Uncle Jaden, with Jaden capable of making Creators when punching things and Alex just creating Splinter Cracks in marble. Still, Alex is pretty DAMN strong for Discipline class fighter at 10 years of age. Numbuh 5/Abigale Lincoln comes in for the rescue with her make shift Lazer Gun made of 24 technology and Junk. Most likely, Alex wants to learn how to make Weapons. It seems that Alex can't remember "Codename: Kids Next Door" that well, but he going to remember pretty soon.

I hope Alex gets some Sword Weapon to use in the NEXT future chapters. It going to be interesting.

Questions

1) Is it confirm that Alex going to be able to use Hamon/Ripple from "Jojo's Bizarre Adventures" and Sword in the next couple chapters?

2) Should we expect the Shadowkhan and Alex to meet again or have a connection? Could Alex figure out to control Shadowkhan Clan of some type by painting/tattooing Tarakudo General mask to his body AND not being controlled by Shadowkhan DARK Chi?

3) What is Uncle Jaden fighting style and is it something like Master Bang style- Water Stream Rock Smashing Fist from "OnePunch-Man"?

4) Will we read Alex go into a RAGE/Berserker moment if Numbuh 5 and Ami are hurt by the Ice Cream Man and possible Count Spankulot?

5) Would Uncle Jaden somehow teach Alex being able to use Hamon/Ripple techniques of "Jojo's Bizarre Adventure"?

Suggestions

1) I just want it to be confirmed. I hope that Alex KEEPS Hamon/Ripple ability. Not to mention getting a Sword of some king. I hope that we have Alex slowly build up to become this BAD Ass character that deals with Supernatural and Crazy world. Alex is a Martial Artist. That good. He just needs some SPECIAL abilities and Weapon. I hope that Alex really grows to have more confidence and realize he can make difference in a situation.

2) I have this idea with Hamon/Ripple for Alex to somehow RESIST the Dark Chi from a Shadowkhan and be able to use Shadowkhan to do his biding.

I got this idea from "Jackie Chan Adventures" episode, 'Queen of the Shadowkhan', where Jade gives herself a FAKE tattoo with ink and tracing on piece of Paper of the image of Tarakudo's General face WHICH gives her the ability to control Shadowwkhan Ninja Clan. You could do that with Alex, BUT the Hamon/Ripple counters the Dark Chi/Evil from the Tattoo/Fake Tattoo on his body. Maybe Alex won't be able to use ALOT of Shadowkhan at once, BUT grows to control them better with his Mind an Martial Art Discipline. You have NINE Shadowkhan Clans to pick from- Ninja, Razor, Bat, Sumo, Samurai, Squid, Crab, Mini and Mantis Khan clans.

Personally, I pick either the Samurai, Razor or Ninja Khan Clan. Most likely the Samurai Khan Clan so Alex can train his Swordmenship better.

3) I like "OnePunch-Man" idea of Martial Artist like Master Bang. A tough old man, super human and knows Martial Artist. Bang to me seems like a BAD ASS form of Master Roshi from "Dragon Ball". I just hope that Uncle Jaden has a NAME for his Martial Artist style and the skills he passing on to Alex. Jaden is Alex sensei/master. I figure that that it rather interesting to know what Alex and Uncle Jaden Martial Arts style is.

4) I just want to read Alex to just rage out. I like that about "Codename: Kids Next Door" with Kuki Sunban/Numbuh 3 or Sonia/Numbuh 83 get SUPER angry that they beat the shit out of they're enemies. Kuki/Numbuh 3 gets angry about her stuff animals being destroyed or something about Rainbow Monkeys. Sonia/Numbuh 83 so afraid of the DARK that she will be thrown into a RAGE when adults tried to force them into the DARK room and she BEATS the crap out of them.

I want Alex to really beat the crap out of the Ice Cream Men and possible Count Spankulot. Just read Alex get so angry that he puts the Adults in the hospital with Broken Bones and Internal Energies.

5) That would be interesting. Sort of like Uncle Jaden can use Hamon/Ripple, but he not a master. Still, Uncle Jaden could give Alex beginning pointers and Alex himself can go through the TRAINING to master his Hamon/Ripple abilities. When Alex goes to join the Kids Next Door, he can go to Tibet to meet MASTERS of Hamon/Ripple to increase Alex skills. Reading Alex using Hamon/Ripple to mix with his Martial Art style would be great. Sort of link Uncle Jaden being a Master, but still learning about Hamon/Ripple. I kind of hope we read more about how Uncle Jaden trains Alex and that Hamon/Ripple would be ONE those skills he passes on to Alex.

Keep up the good work and good luck with work!

Just update when you can and remember this is a fun hobby.
nightmaster000 chapter 8 . 8/24/2017
Another awesome chapter.
coldblue chapter 7 . 8/10/2017
Thanks for updating and great chapter!

Alex:

Well, we can tell in the beginning as soon as Alex could walk he trained in Martial Arts. It really hard to pin down Alex parents skills. I mean Uncle Jaden gave Alex and Ami radio head sets and rings to them in case Uncle Jaden or Mr. Jared happens at the Museum of Wayward Artifacts. The Museum? I kind of hope Alex gets a WEAPON to level up with against the Supernatural. After all, in your Author Notes at the bottom it seems you hint of SLIGHT "Xiaolin Showdown" or "Jackie Chan Adventures" appearing soon in this chapter or something. We find out Ami LOVES ice cream like kids from "Codename: Kids Next Door", but we don't know much about Ami and the emotional issues she has. Its seems Ami really does enjoy Alex though, so if Ami does marry Alex it should be good. That all depends on how Ami takes Alex having sex with Mandy and being the BIOLOGICAL father of Grim Junior! Just kidding, because I don't know how far we are going in the story or sequels for that matter. We get matters of Mr. Jared or Uncle Jaden or Jaden Jared being connected with the Neutron Family. In fact, it seems that Jaden Jared might be a CHILD of Jimmy and Cindy Neutron. That just makes more headaches and makes wonder how OLD is Jaden Jared or the whole Cartoon Universe is.

Future "Fosters Home for Imaginary Friends" fan fiction in the making with a OC or Self-Insert:

I don't know what your plans are. For me? I would do a OC or Self-Insert that a Handy Man/Women that lives in Fosters home. Probably around Frankie Fosters age of being 22, either older or younger. Why? Sort of work that Romance angle with Frankie Foster finding a boy friend/man in her life or we could have Frankie be with a women. Besides Mac, Bloo, Prince Charming and Pizza Teen Delivery guy trying to break up any guy that gets with Frankie. Anyway, yeah a Adult OC/SI would be interesting. With all the Imaginary Friends and when Bloo comes to live, well they're ALOT of Damages done to the House. Being a Handy Man/Women for a OC/SI gives the character PURPOSE for living at Fosters Home and also have unique quirks. Maybe the OC/SI could know Martial Arts, be very good a Engineering or even be good with Children/Imaginary Friends to help some the characters out.

Questions

1) Will Alex use the money from the Person Scouts and POSSIBLE money he saved that Uncle Jaden Jared give him over the years to buy some Fenton Ghost Hunting weapons on the Internet? Should we expect Alex to at least try to ask Grim about weapons that could harm the Supernatural and point out Fenton Ghost Hunting weapons?

2) Is they're a chance at the Museum for Jared to get a Supernatural artifact to use as weapon, such as Mystical Sword of some kind or something like that?

3) Have you been watching Toonami with the with "Jojo's Bizarre Adventure: Stardust Crusaders", where they introduce Stands now appear on Saturday?

4) Is they're a chance that Alex will gain powers from a Anime/Manga, given that "The Grim Adventures of Billy and Mandy" do have parody episodes about "Pokémon" and "Dragon Ball Z"?

5) If you are rapping everything up for Alex to get back to Billy and Mandy, should we expect the Kids Next Door to take notice of Alex in the NEXT chapter? Maybe Alex fighting a KND Villain at the Museum before returning home for Billy birthday and hanging around with Mandy?

6) Should we expect Alex to be able to fight with Hoss Delgado even if Hoss trying to kill Grim, when he appears in Season 1 episodes of "The Grim Adventures of Billy and Mandy"?

Suggestions

1) I figure Alex is one those characters that holds on to his money or forgets a HIDDEN stash of Cash somewhere. Anyway, the Person Scouts had Mandy give Alex a $200 cut. I figure given Uncle Jaden Jared or whatever, keeps giving Alex money and Alex does not spend it at the Gas Station where he meets X-J9/Jenny Wakemen. This would be GREAT for Alex to just gather all his money and see if he can BUY something useful. Alex may look like a Kids, but he been reborn and has a Adult mind. I figure Alex would talk with Grim if anything on the MORTAL plan or Science. Probably with Grim accidently blabbing about Fenton Works own Ghost Hunting inventions. About Grim trying to REAP a soul or Ghost, but Maddie and Jack Fenton thought Grim was a Ghost and blasted him with Ectoplasm Beam or Sludge. Alex would look up the Weapons on the Internet for Fenton Weapons.

2) You gave me some hope for "Xiaolin Showdown" or "Jackie Chan Adventures" being linked to this chapter. I hope it "Jackie Chan Adventures" the Dark Hand gang drops a Electric Sword for Alex to get his hands on. If not that "Xiaolin Showdown" would could have Alex getting the Sword of the Storm to use. I figure something Magical or Advance weapon would be good for Alex. Not to mention Alex would have a sword.

3) Yeah, that happening on Toonami, in case you are in America. Jotaro Kujo now appears with these mysterious Stands and DIO Brando back for blood to kill all Joseph Joestar descendants. I figure if you are a "Jojo Bizarre Adventure" fan, then you should know that the Stardust Ark is happening for the next generation of Jojo's. It would be interesting to think if you like Stands or not. I know you like Hamon or Ripple.

4) Honestly? I would not mind if Alex was capable of using Hamon/Ripple in "My Life In The Grim Adventures Of Billy And Mandy". "The Grim Adventures of Billy and Mandy" has them having parodies of "Pokémon" and "Dragon Ball Z". The episodes are called "It's Hokey Mon" and "Chicken Ball Z". Hell! Mandy is seen driving a Motorcycle that that is like Kaneda's bike from "Akira" in the episode "Hog Wild" with Billy being mad about all the rules.

It would be cool if Alex could use Hamon/Ripple to ENHANCE his Martial Art skills. Fighting Supernatural creatures weak against the Sun or the Hamon/Ripple energy. Vampires usually are weak against that, so Vampires do appear in "The Grim Adventures of Billy and Mandy" and this could be used to put Count Spankulot in the Hospital from "Codename: Kids Next Door". I figure if you did your own Fan Fiction parody of a Anime/Manga, then Alex using Hamon/Ripple from "Jojo's Bizarre Adventures" would be cool AND Alex would keep those ability to use Hamon/Ripple.

5) Alex has to get the KND to notice him in the next chapter. The next chapter raps everything up and Alex returns in Billy and Mandy. I figure the a KND Villain will appear at the Mesuem. Most likely the Ice Cream Men or possible even Count Spankulot. I figure BOTH. If Alex was able to BEAT up all the Ice Cream Men and Count Spankulot, it would get the KND notice quickly and recruit Alex probably in Endsville with some KND 2x4 technology using transporting Alex to the Moon Base or Antarctica to ask/be recruited into the KND.

The Ice Cream Men are enemies to Kids and the KND working for Father/Benedict Uno. Probably have Alex deal with the Ice Cream Men not giving Ami some Ice Cream, which leads to a fight in the Museum of Wayword Artifacts. Of course, I want Spankulot to be their. Count Spankulot would most likely be at the Muesum enjoying himself when he see's Alex beat up the Ice Cream Men, then Count Spankulot thinks it a good idea to teach Alex a lesson by SPANKING him. What happens? Alex goes berserker on Count Spankulot and send him to the hospital with the Ice Cream Men.

6) Yeah, that would be interesting to read. Alex trying to fight Hoss Delgado. Sort of read Alex try to measure his skills against a idiotic, psychotic and VERY strong specter hunter. Most likely read how Alex test himself against Hoss Delgado. Most likely Alex will lose, but I think it would be a good fight. Alex would use his discipline, intelligence and whatever he has on hand to fight Hoss Delgado. Sort of read how Alex fight Hoss Delgado. Hell! Maybe Hoss Delgado giving Alex some information on how to fight Supernatural. Hoss telling Alex to look up Fenton Works and their Inventions to use against the Supernatural. Of course, Hoss would call Alex a little girl and tell him to start with baby steps of fighting Supernatural by looking/hunting for Ghosts. Alex would be pissed being called a little girl, but at least Alex would have a place to ORDER weapons to fight the Supernatural.

Keep up the good work and thanks updating!
Guest chapter 6 . 8/5/2017
Liking the interactions bro
coldblue chapter 6 . 8/5/2017
Thanks for updating and great chapter!

Alex:

Okay we just get a kick off for the Road Trip/Mission with Uncle Jaden and Ami. Ami is interesting character, because she is Alex fiancée and is connected with this Star Clan. Star Clan huh? Eh, what do I know. Anyway, it sort like Ami is bonding with Alex and is beginning to like Alex with how they tease/fight with each other. Mandy. Wow! That was a surprise. I did not expect that interrogation to come so soon and I like how Alex defused Mandy wrath/interrogation. Alex told the truth and did not hold back about probably dying or not. Interesting idea is, Mandy views Alex as something valuable and we can't tell if it because of Alex company or skills. It going to be interesting to read if WORD in Endsville or the kids at Alex school find out that Alex has a Fiancée. Ami and Mandy butting heads would be interesting, but not like the Cartoon version. More like Ami and Mandy would clash with manipulation and something out of a Anime/Manga. Interesting idea of X-J9/Jenny Wakeman appearing this chapter. It would be interesting to read Jenny remembering Alex or perhaps Alex uncle Jaden is criminal that Jenny could not capture. It interesting to read what can happen.

Cartoon Universe or Cartoon X-overs:

Again, thanks for letting X-J9/Jenny Wakemen make a appearance! Either your "My Life is a Teenage Robot" or you read Bleedemen "Powerpuff Girls D" comic. I hope to read what other Cartoon Characters will appear. Most likely "Powerpuff Girls", "Codename: Kids Next Door" and "The Grim Adventures of Billy and Mandy". What other Cartoon Characters can we bring in? Probably "Ed, Edd and Eddy" would be good idea. Maybe Alex encounters the Kanker Sisters. Other ideas would be "Xiaolin Showdown" and "Jackie Chan Adventures" to give us more Magic/Supernatural versions of Cartoons and for Alex to FIGHT other Martial Artists or Demons. It would be great read Alex fight the Xiaolin Monks/Dragons or maybe have deal/fight with the Black Hand/Shendu. Maybe some "Dexters Lab" where Alex could take notice for a couple of Genius that are children, they can be very stupid or immature, such as Dexter and Mandark. Just some ideas to think about.

Questions

1) What is crazy about the idea of Alex finding a sword to give use for the sheath his mother left Alex?

2) If you had to give your Original Character/Alex a special abilites from a Anime/Manga series which one these three would you choose: "Bleach", "Jojo's Bizarre Adventures" or "Yu Yu Hakusho"?

3) When Alex joins the KND, what will his Numbuh/Codename be?

4) Should we expect Alex to work with Mandy on gaining knowledge of the KND? Maybe have Alex be Mandy spy for her on the information of the KND?

5) Have you thought of "Xiaolin Showdown" and "Jackie Chan Adventures" characters to appear in this story? Maybe have Alex fight or deal with the Supernatural issues for his OWN personal adventures?

6) Why does every chapter begin like we are reading some out of Alex journal/memoir? Is Alex documenting his life and every chapter sort introduces background/information that relates to chapter/story as whole?

Suggestions

1) I just hope that sheath has a point. What the point of having it, besides sentimental value of it belonging to Alex mother. Really? I hope Alex gets Sword of some kind to use. Sort of read how Alex LEVEL up with a New Weapon to train and master. Sort of have Alex improve his Martial Arts by studying the way of the Sword. I don't know if Alext mother sheath can take in ANY sword. Maybe the Sheath can stop electrical attacks like in "Inuyasha" Anime/Manga or maybe the Sheath could hit Supernatural beings like Ghosts. I don't know. I can't read your mind.

2) I'm a fan of Anime/Manga. I kept think that maybe SOMEBODY could write a story for OC in the Cartoon Universe, but the OC has power from the Anime/Manga. Something unique.

With "Life In The Grim Adventures Of Billy and Mandy", I like to think what Anime/Manga power he should have. Alex should have a power that Supernatural. Honestly? I believe "Jojo's Bizarre Adventures" powers would be good fit for Alex in "The Grim Adventures of Billy and Mandy" using powers such as Stands, Ripples or Spin to fight his enmies. "Bleach" is a idea for Alex to have a WEAPON from his soul and that his mother sheath could contain his Zanpakuto/Soul Slayer. With "Yu Yu Hakusho", I could read Alex train to be Spiritual aware and develop a weapon like Spirit Sword or Spirit Gun to fight off the Supernatural.

Just some fun ideas to think about. I'M NOT ASKING FOR ALEX TO HAVE THESE ABILITIES! I'm just wondering which Anime/Manga series with the Supernatural would fit Alex skill set or something like that out of curiosity.

3) Numbuh 666 or 667. I don't know. I figure where Alex is in Endsville and being friends with Billy and Mandy, well the Codename would be Evil/Destructive in some way. I'm interested in what Alex Numbuh would be if he did join the Kids Next Door. Sort of hope that the Numbuh means something to Alex in some way. Hell! Alex Numbuh could be the AGE he was when he died and was REBORN in this Cartoon Universe/"Life In The Grim Adventures Of Billy and Mandy". It up to you.

4) With how Alex explained to Mandy in this chapter on his Adventures/Suicide Mission with his uncle, yeah I could read Alex being a willing Spy for Mandy. Maybe make some sense how Mandy knows so much about the KND and how "The Grim Adventures of the KND" episode happen. Alex spies for Mandy and feeds information about the KND history to Mandy. Mandy being Mandy, well she realize ALL THE RESOURCES could be used to take over the World and gets the idea of creating the Mandy Next Door. Just a idea. Alex probably does not care being the ONLY operative in Endsville and does NOT like the idea of his Memory being erased at 13 years old. It up to you.

5) These are Cartoon Shows that have characters that FIGHT with Martial Arts. Most likely, if I had to pick between the TWO, I go with "Xiaolin Showdown" for Alex to fight kids or teenagers that know how to use Martial Arts. Sort of read how Alex martial arts stands against trainee's who study Xiaolin Martial Arts they're Magic. It up to you. I do love "Jackie Chan Adventures" Supernatural with Asian themed Supernatural such as Chi Magic, Demons and Mystical items of power. It would be interesting if Alex got a Oni Mask tattooed or drawn on him to make him the Oni Kind. Maybe even read Jade Chan challenge Alex to fight and read how that turns out.

6) Yeah, every chapter has this PARAGRAPH or sentences that seems like we are reading something out Alex journal or memoir. I like it. It very interesting and unique for each chapter. The only writer on the Fan Fiction site that is The Struggling Warrior who written "Obsession", "Absolution", "Conviction" and currently working on "Desperation".

In the end of this story, it would be interesting if Mandy reading something of Alex journal or memoir. Either that or each chapter Mandy reading a journal/memoir of Alex to find out more about him and realizing his value that she could use. Just a idea.

Keep up the good work and thanks for updating!
Guest chapter 5 . 8/3/2017
Dude I'm rewatching the show rn and then I found this beautiful creation. It's great so far and I'm excited for more. (Alex x Mandy all the way)
coldblue chapter 5 . 8/2/2017
Thanks for updating and great chapter!

Alex:

Well, I'm satisfied with the character and Author Notes responses. I get Alex feeling of frustration. Honestly, if anyone of us was taken from our reality and put into a Cartoon Reality, well I would think that the Universe is a JOKE or it more complicated with Reality/Multiverse. It seems that Alex parents seem more like ANIME/Manga characters with Uncle Jaden. If not, please give us a SUMMARY of Alex parents and uncle Jaden history in the Cartoon Universe if they are Original Characters as well. Alex having a Fiancée! Yeah, that Anime/Manga type of feeling. This mysterious Fiancee? Well, parts of me hopes the girl is from "Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles" Karai/Miwa of the Foot Clan. Sort of would explain the whole Clan thing. I guess Alex is Asian or has some connections with that. Alex letting Grim, Billy and Mandy know that he will be go for a while. Mandy going to get her information out of Alex, his family and skills sooner or later. Right now, Mandy respects Alex which is hard. Ha! It looks like Alex does have issues with looking like a Girl and cosplay in the future, which is a Cartoon and Anime/Manga thing for characters to do.

My reviews and the whole Questions/Suggestions I give you:

They are suppose to help motivation or giving you ideas for story to continue. I don't know how long you will last with your Updates. School or real Life going to be calling soon. Fan Fiction is a HOBBY, so at some point I will be waiting for Weeks or Months. I'm also trying not have you write the story MY way. I want to read the story your way. It interesting and I don't get a lot of Fan Fiction stories with Original Character in the Cartoons such as "The Grim Adventures of Billy and Mandy". I been waiting for something like that. I kind of hope that Alex is grounded in the Cartoon and Bleedmen Universe. Half the time I'm confused if Alex Martial Arts training and relatives belong to Anime/Manga. A Anime/Manga I have not read/watched yet. That the only confusion I have.

Do I want Alex and Mandy to be couple? Maybe, but it up to you. Honestly, I would be okay with Alex just being bachelor having DIFFERENT relationship with different Cartoon Women/Girls.

Questions

1) Which Powerpuff Girl will like, hate or not care that much about Alex?

2) Is the KND going to take notice of Alex skills when he on a Mission with his Uncle Jaden? Maybe Alex would get spanked by Count Spankulot, but Alex gets pushed in a RAGE by being spanked and basically beats the DAY LIGHTS out of a strange man who dares spank him/random children?

3) Are we going to have Alex find a sword to put in his Mother sheath?

4) Have you thought of other characters point of views for "Life In The Grim Adventures of Billy and Mandy"? Could we read Mandy point of view of planting bug to spy on Alex missions/skills or maybe Grim notice that Alex soul is different because Alex reborn in this Cartoon Universe given that Grim is the Grim Reaper and all?

5) Does Alex have history with Mindy or Sperg? Could Mindy tried to steal Alex away because Alex is Mandy 'friend' or maybe Sperg tried to bully Alex and that did happen for a while before Alex started kicking Sperg ass from his Martial Arts training?

Suggestions

1) Yeah, I like to explore that idea. Which Powerpuff Girls do I want Alex to have a friendship/crush? I go with Buttercup, because Alex is tough and yet not super smart or kind. I would find it interesting that Blossom would not care or like Alex, such as Alex beating the crap out the Gang Green Gang badly or one of the Powerpuff Girls villains. Bubbles? Honestly, I don't know or care. Maybe Bubbles and Alex would just be okay with each other and chill when they are around each other.

Just some ideas. The reason I think Buttercup could have crush on Alex, well "Powerpuff Girls D" if you read that Comic has Buttercup have crush on Samurai Jack or Mr./Sensei Jack. I figure that Alex would be someone Buttercup could have crush on and probably like how Alex beats the day light out of Villains or opponents.

2) That just a idea. I figure the KND Organization would take notice of a 10 year old with Martial Arts training and capable of defeating ONE of they're dangerous enemies would get the KND to want to recruit Alex. I picked Spankulot; because I figure some like Alex would hate to be spanked given his training, he used to be a Adult and the ANGER/Confusion one would have being randomly spanked. Why would Spankulot spank Alex? Sort of before Spankulot gets put in Prison by Sector V (Numbuh 1, 2, 3, 4, and 5 team) we could have Spankulot battle RANDOM KND and Spanking them. Alex just stumbles on the battle when he has a BREAK from Uncle Jaden and they're Mission, than Spankulot grabs Alexs and spanks him like the Spank happy Vampire he is.

Alex basically goes Berserker on Spankulot and sends him to the hospital. Sort of Spankulot reminding Alex he not in control and being man-handle would set off Alex anger. Boy! The KND would want a kid that could send a Adult to the Hospital and when they find out Alex lives in Endsville, they would FINALLY operative in Endsville with all the Weird Dangers in that town.

3) It would be interesting idea. Sword suggestions from me would be "Jackie Chan Adventures" the Electric Swords from the Dark Hand, "Xiaolin Showdown" Shen Gon Wu sword likethe Sword of the Storm, or maybe something else. Cartoon Swords ideas to think about for Alex to get: "G.I Joe" Snake-Eyes ninja sword, Ascalon from "Ben 10: Ultimate Alien", the Sword of Righteousness or Jack Sword from "Samurai Jack", Sokka of the Water tribe Meteor/Space Sword from "Avatar the Last Air Bender", and Fin the Human from "Adventure Time" Curse Grass Sword.

These are just some bad ass swords that could be the ONE for Alex to use. I figure Alex needs a Mystical Sword or a Sword with reputation at least. I kind of hope Alex has some Mystical Sword to fight with Supernatural dangers of Endsville or really Billy and Mandy adventures.

4) This could be a Interlude chapter. A chapter that takes a break from the MAIN story and sort of focus on other characters perspective. I figure Grim and Mandy would be the best choices given they are smart or interesting characters. With Mandy, I figure she has some SPY bug or something on Alex to monitor and gather more information about her 'friend'. Mandy is controlling and out for power, so I don't think it out of character for Mandy to spy on Alex and I think Alex would take notice of something. Like a Spy bug or gift that Mandy gave Alex such as a Watch or Ring that holds no significance to Mandy besides spying on Alex.

With Grim? Well, being the Grim Reaper and well from "The Grim Adventures of Billy and Mandy" it will take him some time realize that Alex soul different. Sure, Alex has a MORTAL soul, but Grim will probably study Alex and go to the Underworld to find out more about Alex. Maybe go to Father Time to see Alex Hourglass to notice anything different. It could be that Grim or really Grim Sycthye takes notice that Alex is a reincarnated in this Universe. Maybe someone that Grim needs to read before people get the idea they can be reincarnated or people trying to CHEAT death. Grim hates to be cheated after all.

5) They are Billy and Mandy mortal enemies. I mean mortal and NOT eternal enemies at least. It would be pretty Cannon for "The Grim Adventures of Billy and Mandy". Mindy would try to steal Mandy new friend, which back when Alex was getting used to Billy and Mandy was Mandy newest friend. It would be funny if Alex called Mindy a freak fro wanting spend time with him so much and called her a freak, which would make Mindy HATE Alex and strangely respect/attracted to him in some ways. Sperg? Well I figure give Alex some years of being Bullied by Sperg and with the training he gets from his Uncle Jaden and his parents Martial Arts. What do you get? Alex beating up Sperg and holding grudges. Sperg would probably be cocky and try to fight Alex sometimes, BUT Alex would basically beat up Sperg and even add insult to injury by taking Sperg money.

It would be funny if Alex did check out Sperg Mom and that makes Sperg angry! What? Sperg Mom in "The Grim Adventures of Billy and Mandy" hot. I know. I been re-watching the Cartoon.

Keep up the good work and thanks for updating!
Guest chapter 4 . 8/1/2017
Great chapter. In regards to if mandy and Alex get together, if they do can you make Alex be the one person that Mandy genuinely cares for and likes to be around? Don't change her personality as she's my favorite character for a reason. Just let her show it in her own way. And with Alex I like what it looks like your doing with the whole getting frustrated cause he couldn't protect billy and Mandy. I'm liking this so far. Hell im liking it so much I'm leaving a review/suggestion for the first time. Sorry for the paragraph just really want you to keep it up. Again nice chapter.
coldblue chapter 4 . 7/31/2017
Thanks for updating and great chapter!

Just a few grammar errors this chapter, but it was a great to read!

Alex:

Interesting chapter/episode. Mostly cannon with "The Grim Adventures of Billy and Mandy" with the whole Person Scouts/Cookies. I forget the episode name. Anyway, it seems most likely cannon. I do like the background of Uncle Jaden, but I don't know if I'm suppose to know his character that well. Is Uncle Jaden a Cartoon Character? Should we expect Alex own parents to RELATE back to Cartoon characters we know? I don't know. I want to ask those questions and have, but I will have to wait and read until the revelations. Alex training being NOTICED by Mandy, which is great to read. Mandy is very intimidating and I wonder how long it will be before Alex is interrogated by Mandy. It going to be interesting.

What do I want in the future of "Life in The Grim Adventures of Billy and Mandy":

Maybe the KND recruiting Alex soon and sort of diverting the focus from Billy, Mandy, and Grim for a bit. Get a couple chapters/Time Skip of Alex being trained in Antarctica for TRAINEE'S cadets of the KND. I don't want Alex to stay at the Antarctica base for long, so maybe a Month with Alex being VERY good KND cadet for a early graduation and the KND need to have KND Operative in Endsville. Basically a crash course. Of course, I hope Mandy do would notice Alex absences. Why? Most like the KND will do something like what they did with "The Grim Adventures of KND" like some KND operative pretending to be Alex and MOST of Endsville being stupid to go along with it, BUT Mandy. Most likely when Mandy comes back, she will want compensation. Such as Alex information about the KND/History. This way we get the idea of HOW Mandy knows about Kids Next Door through Alex and makes plans that lead up with Mandy taking over the KND to becoming the Mandy Next Door in "The Grim Adventures of the KND". Alex would probably give Mandy info without much issue. You don't deny Mandy after all, if you want to live comfortably or crippled for the rest of you life.

I do love read Alex involved in "The Grim Adventures of Billy and Mandy", but this is Fan Fiction. Mix something up. Add some "Codename: Kids Next Door" or even do something DIFFERENT from "The Grim Adventures of Billy and Mandy" that you thought would have been good in at Episode, but writing it out in Fan Fiction.

Questions

1) Can you give us more description of what Alex looks like in the next chapter to give image of this character? Is Alex a boy or girl, given that Alex is a very neutral-gender name?

2) Have you thought of Alex and Grim to grow to dislike each other? Maybe Alex would dislike or hate Grim whenever Grim tried to GET RID/Kill off Billy and Mandy, so Grim does not have to be Billy and Mandy best friend FOREVER!?

3) Who are Alex parents? Are they Cartoon Characters or should we expect them to be something from Anime/Manga such as "Kenchi: The Mightiest Disciple"?

4) What does this Sword/Katana that Alex have do? Is it Supernatural or hold some meaning to Alex?

5) Should we expect Alex to go to Townsville or meet/know the Powerpuff Girls?

6) How far have you gotten with "Grim Tales"? Do you like "Grim Tales" or not?

Suggestions

1) Sort a image of the character. I remember the Person Scouts uniform and I know Alex had bandages on from his TRAINING with his Uncle Jaden. I look at the IMAGE of "Life In The Grim Adventures of Billy and Mandy" with a Brown Haired individual, pale, wears a Martial Arts gi, is Athletic, and POSSIBEL Male. It really hard to tell. I bet Alex is close to being someone that cane be MISTAKEN as Girl or Boy. I remember at School, Billy and Mandy wear school uniforms that is a White Shirt with Blue Pants or girls with Blue skirts.

I hope that Alex and Mandy does use each other for their FIRST, even Alex being the BIOLOGICAL father of Grim Junior. Sort of would be cool that Alex and Grim Junior have a strong resemblance to each other.

2) Yeah that would be good. Why? If they're is a Sequel to "Life In The Grim Adventures of Billy and Mandy", then in "Grim Tales" Grim Senior does NOT like Grim Junior BIOLOGICAL father. I figure Grim and Alex would slowly develop a bit of hate with each other. Alex would not like how Grim tries to kill Billy and Mandy, along with himself. What? "The Grim Adventures of Billy and Mandy" does have episodes of Grim trying to get rid of Billy and Mandy or some cases hoping they die/kill each other. Grim reason for hating Alex? Basically, Alex history with Mandy and actually being close with Mandy. "Grim Tales" has Mandy married to Grim, so as a husband he would feel threaten given Mandy and Alex history/possible emotional connection with each other. Mandy in love? Terrifying, but it would be interesting. Mandy would still marry Grim for POWER/Immortality! Alex? Well Mandy would at least allow Alex to close to Mandy emotional and be close. Something that Grim, as husband, never had even while married or as friends. Grim does not care if Mandy sleeps with OTHER Men and possibly Women, because Grim is skeleton and tries to keep his Marriage good. Just a idea.

3) I'm guessing that Alex parents are from a Anime/Manga. I would have loved if Alex parents was some characters like Benedict Uno/Father from KND Universe and possible Sedusa from Powerpuff Girls Universe. Oh well. I just hope that we get to know who Alex parents are and WHAT Martial Arts they study. Sort of could read Alex father being a Grand Master Martial Artist and I can guess that Alex mother as a Weapon Grand Master with the Katana/Sword. It would be interesting to read the quirks that Alex parents have and who they are.

I kind of hope that if Alex does relate to "Kenchi The Mightiest Disciple" he would become LEGENDARY Master in Martial Arts into the Sequel of this story.

4) I hope the Sword/Katana is Supernatural, but has a interesting History/Origin. I just hope Alex uses this Sword/Katana at some point. Sort of read Alex use the Sword/Katana as a KND operative or against Supernatural enemies that Billy and Mandy have with Grim. It would SWEET if the Sword/Katana could be linked with abilities such "Bleach" Anime/Manga, which gives Alex the ability to FIGHT harder against Supernatural enemies and BECOME stronger.

5) It would be interesting. Sort of read how Alex knowing the Powerpuff Girls or at least know some villains in Townsville. I figure that it would be just a idea, but interesting idea. Maybe find out more about Alex father, sort of read Alex father reputation in Townsville given the Monsters, Aliens, Supernatural, and Heroes. It would be interesting to read if Alex has reputation in Townsville or with the Powerpuff Girls. Maybe even Alex being friends, enemies, or mixed feelings with Powerpuff Girls given contrasting personality/history. Again, just a idea.

6) I hope you like "Grim Tales", but I'm not you. When I read "Grim Tales", I found decent sequel to my FAVORITE Cartoons with serious under tone of a Comic. "Grim Tales" and "Powerpuff Girls D" are great Comics to read ONLINE. I hope you enjoy reading "Grim Tales". If you like "Grim Tales" check out Bleedmen other Comics or at least "Powerpuff Girls D" comic because it equally good.

Keep up the good work and thanks for updating!
coldblue chapter 3 . 7/29/2017
Thanks for updating and interesting chapter!

Alex:

Well, we did follow a bit of cannon with "Grim Adventures of Billy and Mandy" meeting Nergal for the first time. I have to admit I like that Alex does observe Billy and Mandy. Billy, well I think Alex has a soft spot for Billy because he so STUPID that he innocent in ways and sort keeps things interesting. Mandy, well Alex notices the dangers of Mandy and in someway tried to develop connection with her as friend knowing how dangerous she is. I did like how Alex did try to escape or attack Nergal this chapter. It must be interesting. Alex might be frustrated with ALL of this and wants to become POWERFUL to be somewhat of a protector for Billy and Mandy. With Grim, well it does not seem that Alex and Grim developed any friendship/bond besides being casual friends/acquaintance. The CLIFFHANGER interesting. Are we meeting Alex family member or someone who knows Alex? Is this brown haired stranger a Cartoon Character we should know?

Check it out next time on DRAGON BA-, er uh, "Life in The Grim Adventures of Billy and Mandy"!

Questions

1) Should we expect Alex to just use the Kids Next Door to gain more knowledge and strength? Maybe Alex being the ONLY KND operative in Endsville?

2) Have you thought of Alex looking on the Internet and saving up money to BUY items to fight the Supernatural? Maybe have Alex buy some Fenton Ghost Hunting weapons?

3) Is they're a chance Alex will be wise when asking something from Grim? Maybe Alex could ask Grim to give Alex access to the Underworld knowledge/internet to give Alex access to more Supernatural knowledge?

4) Is they're a chance for Alex and Mandy to have close relationship? Maybe in the FUTURE Alex and Mandy would be 'friends-with-benefits'?

Suggestions

1) I figure Alex, if he does join the KND, he would use them. I like the idea of "Codename: Kids Next Door"; but I always conflicted with Kids, Teens and Adults fighting each other. Not to mention KND actually ERASING most the memories of KND operatives of ANY connections of KND along with ANY good memories and friends.

My hope? Alex just uses the KND to learn to fight better to face whatever adventures Billy and Mandy face. Not to mention learning to build Two-by-Four technology as a BACK up weapon. I found it interesting how KND could make weapons out of spare parts, trash or junk and BAM! You got a Laser Gun or something that break some bones. Of course, I like the idea of Alex going rogue and being chased by KND. Still, Endsville would be the BANE of the KND for being very weird and dangerous. Sort of have Alex use Endsville as shield to get the KND to keep away from them. After the whole "The Grim Adventures of the KND", the whole KND organization will probably stay CLEAR away for Endsville because Billy, Mandy, Grim and of course Alex.

It a possibility to help make "Life in The Grim Adventures of Billy and Mandy" a Alternative Universe by adding some "Codename: Kids Next Door" for Alex to have adventures/character growth.

2) This is just a idea and NO I don't think it would be a Crossover with "Danny Phantom". I just figure it would be convenient for Alex to have some WEAPONS against the Supernatural and also explain how the HELL do Jack and Maddie Fenton make money being scientist that HUNT Ghost and have TWO kids. The answer? Most like Jack and Maddie Fenton sell they're Fenton Gadgets and have patenting some inventions of they're technology to make MONEY!

It probably going to be expensive, but so are kids buying video games consuls that COST $400 to $600 dollars. Plus, most people think Ghost Hunting a joke and the technology, so Jack and Maddie would probably have the price range for SOME Gadgets to be in $200 to $300 dollars. What weapons/tech should Alex get? Fenton Ghost Gloves, Fenton Phones, Fenton Wrist Rays and Fenton Bazooka. I figure the Fenton Gloves, Phones and Wrist Rays would cost $300 dollars; so all together $900 dollars. The Fenton Bazooka would be $900 to $1,100. What? It a Bazooka and could blow a WALL apart.

I figure Alex will figure out a way to get money. Maybe blackmail some characters or maybe sell some Grim supernatural items in his Trunk for QUICK cash, before Grim learns about it. Hell! Maybe if Alex has a REAL bad day he could beat up Sperg and his bully crew to get THEIR money they bullied and easily a couple Hundred Dollars.

3) It seems like interesting idea. I figure Alex would ask Grim something, so why not a CONNECTION to the Underworld Internet. Why?

Well you could take some ideas from Superantural from other shows. Yes, I already suggested "Danny Phantom", but they're are others. What would I suggest? Maybe have some "Jackie Chan Adventures" or "Xiaolin Showdown". "Jackie Chan Adventures" you could have Alex look up and learnhow to use Chi spells or some MORE cool like a Mystical item like the Opal and Electric Sword items that he might buy for a BARGEN. What? I bet the Supernatural World or Underworld would not care so much about Supernatural items because they are Supernatural. Plus, this story is in "The Grim Adventures of Billy and Mandy", so some stupid monster or person running the equivalent of the Underworld version of would be able to get these items for cheep. Same could be with "Xiaolin Showdown", the same thing with Underworld version of , but Alex could purchase some Shen Gong Wu that has NOT activated or someone like Katnappe steals from Jack Spicer or Xiaolin Monks Shen Gong Wu. You can choose the Shen Gong Wu that Alex would want to use.

Just some ideas.

4) I'm not asking for Alex and Mandy to be a couple. Just remember Mandy in the "Crushed" Episode of Billy and Mandy cartoon, and how she rejected Pip/the unknown drama kid who got socked.

This is much later and I don't expect it to happen in the future. Alex might be the ONLY boy/male in Endsville who not completely stupid or thirsting for Mandy attention. Also for Alex, well Mandy not some cannon fodder or one-dimension character besides Mandy dream to rule the WORLD! Not a whole lot to pick. Plus, you know "Grim Tales" and Mandy does become QUITE Hot as the Queen Bitch. I could read Mandy using Alex against Irwin when Irwin keeps asking Mandy out and Mandy would use Alex as a shield against Irwin. What would happen with Alex and Irwin? Most like Irwin would attack or see Alex as his love rival and Alex would not care as much because he know Mandy just using him.

Still, I bet Mandy wants to grow up and not be left behind her peers. Most likely Mandy would use Alex for a First-Kiss, Date, Make-out and Etc.. I know 'Friends-with-Benefit' would be a M-Rated story so, I not asking for Sex/Lemon scenes. Most likely I could read that happen with Mandy and Alex. Mandy could use Alex to shed off ALL her Firsts when dealing with Boys and Alex would just get the benefit of a girl/Mandy, even if Alex has to be VERY careful when dealing with Mandy as a girl. God forbid Alex angers Mandy to a point, otherwise he will know TRUE pain/suffering.

Keep up the good work and thanks for updating!
Guest chapter 2 . 7/26/2017
Please continue, there isn't enough tics like this
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