Reviews for Beginnings: Goniff |
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![]() ![]() Very well written, you had each character spot on |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lovely observation of Goniff, such an interesting character, so often a catalyst within the group, Garrison's patience with him always pleased me. You have done a great job on his introduction to the Mansion. Thank you |
![]() ![]() With all Garrison's travels I am surprised he doesn't know Yiddish.! |
![]() ![]() Is Garrison's team so efficient at the beginning ? What do they learn from the following missions. |
![]() ![]() Garrison is the key to the building of the team |
![]() ![]() Very well done. I would love to see Garrison |
![]() ![]() Anxiously awaiting Chief. Hope it's coming soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() Never thought about doing Garrison. Hmmmm. |
![]() ![]() I GUESS Garrison will be the last one |
![]() ![]() Yes, Kittystitch is writing her take on Chief's arrival at the Mansion. |
![]() ![]() Is Kittystitch writing the Chief portion of the story? |
![]() ![]() Chief is the next? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love it! Everyone perfectly in character with some new insight into their personalities. |
![]() ![]() Full of imagination, nice job |
![]() ![]() Love it! I really enjoy your writing, these are excellent portrayals all round. I look forward to our last team members arrival, soon... please. pretty please! |