Nice

I didn't really mind the previous prologue, to be honest with you; I've seen quite a few fabrications with that way of... 'Speaking,' I'll say. I will agree that the secondary prologue gives a much clearer picture on what is happening. I'm sure you'll be able to keep going. Even if we don't always say it, every person who reads hopes you will continue in a way that benefits you.

Oh mah gosh this started out amazin and I already love it! I never thought of a story where Frisk goes back to the time when chara and asriel were still alive! Great job! I can't wait for more!

Seems pretty interesting! I'll try to keep my eye on this one!

awesome