Reviews for Father's Duty |
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Foy the Snooze Button chapter 1 . 12/25/2017 Spot on. Is there going to be a part two? |
KuroiOozora chapter 1 . 10/17/2017 Well.. This was unexpected.. I really thought that person would be Itachi or Shishui or Shikamaru or male!Hinata or Kakashi (bless his soul if it's actually him.. His own teacher will kill him XD ) or maybe Neji (or Gaara who was visiting or Haku who survived the kill during Wave) and a small thought of possibility on Shino and Kiba, who will steal Naru from protective-Minato XD |
Shiks chapter 1 . 8/23/2017 OMG otp right here I'm loving this the most holyshit |
61394 chapter 1 . 8/9/2017 Don't feel bad Minato now you can practice for when the grandkids first date |
Frost2130674 chapter 1 . 7/29/2017 Naruko and Sakura as lovers nice it's different and has alot of ideas. |
Gen. Malaise chapter 1 . 7/24/2017 Might want to go back over this for some spelling mistakes. You had Minato say Sakura can call him 'into' "your dates here" should be "your date's here" or "your date is here" "you know they boy" should be "you know the boy" "Then who tell me who it is" should be "Then tell me who it is" "With their entire bodies, full force right from the start" isn't a complete sentence. I'm sure there's more, you might want to look into getting a beta. |
phantom99 chapter 1 . 7/24/2017 This is pretty good hope you make more of it |
Hello chapter 1 . 7/12/2017 So funny! :) Awesome job |
Logical jerk chapter 1 . 7/12/2017 Pink is a tint of red, there is a difference. Just saying, ya know. Anyway, if this was a genderbent Naruto, why isn't the character's name Naruko? If your doing requests, please continue your Boruto era divorce fic. |
fanofthisfiction chapter 1 . 7/14/2017 Definitely an unexpected twist to a fem Naruto story. The humor works and the character responses keep things light and fun. Thanks for sharing! |
thedarkpokemaster chapter 1 . 7/13/2017 oh man this had me laughing so hard and we need a follow up with the date with Fem Naruto and Sakura. |
9462641 chapter 1 . 7/13/2017 OH GOD THIS IS GOLD )))))))))))))))) AND HOLY GOD THE END )))))))))))))))) INSTANT FAV DAMN IT )))))) Your story is one of the stories I never knew I needed until I found them. God, now I want (NEED) a continue ))))) Oh and damn, a Fem!Naruto x Sakura is now my new OTP thanks for this :))) Thank you for the great one-shot, and if you'll excuse me, I think I need to find a M version of this :))))))) Fun fact: it might be just a concidence but when it was nearly the end, my mp3 turned to Touch a Touch a Touch a Touch Me'' from "The Rocky Horror Glee Show" :)))))))))))) |
JWolfcat chapter 1 . 7/13/2017 OMG, I never imagined Kushina using the chains on Minato! Frankly I was wondering Neji? Sincerely; Jwolfcat |
MySoberThoughts chapter 1 . 7/13/2017 The sexy potato line killed me |
MySoberThoughts chapter 1 . 7/13/2017 Wow! The humor was very well done. I also like how the narrative follows behind minato's reactions. Haha very nice |