this is a good story, you should continue it author-san

Annoying amnesia gamers mind my ass.

Please continue . has potential .

I was okay with him telling people about his game system. But the party invite stuff is a big nono. I'll be dropping your fic here.

I so enjoy reading this story that you made up and hope that you will please continue it soon by posting new chapters in the near future.

So review shits boring like mc is weak as hell not grinding enough imo and he's not enjoying life as a gamer should seducing girls having fun like most gamers should getting stronger instead it's like I'm reading about canon touma with gamer and a bit of fore knowledge so meh regret wasting my time not bad read just boring af

Ughh I'm losing liking already I found this in selfish insert area sadly mc is being all like oh I'm not a pedo blah blah ughhh so annoying who cares your same age now I always dislike chars that say pedo cause of 15 year old girls and shit like bitch she's not 10 after 13 it's free game in fanfiction imo

Him telling her is a drop from me

Uh... I got one word for this on Anand, ol' chum. Ouch.

First off, you're Indian? I never noticed that the first time around.

Ok, I decided to just lay out my thoughts for you in an actual review because apparently that makes it more legit. Looking back on this fic, it was actually pretty fun if you got over the cringe factor. Most SI stories are hard to pull off so I understand. Most authors tend to get strokes early on too so it's good you're still with us pal. The real kicker here besides the cringiness is the hamfisted demeanour of it. Things just felt really blocky and if it weren't for that I could actually seeing myself respecting you more. Ok, that was a joke, but you get the point. Despite that, I still highly encourage you to keep writing your stories, if not this, then maybe another project. I'd be happy to help you with anything. You got the skills. Now you just have to make use of them.

Your friend and memer,

Healthcare.

... you do realize that 25000 yen is approximately $250, right? So Touma just got ripped off buying a shitty Katana for approximately $3000 worth of books...

Really? Out of everything you go with Electricity? Even though Misaka Mikoto is already a main character and has that EXACT SAME ABILITY?

With this chapter, it has been made rather apparent that you are 'borrowing' heavily from a certain RWBY SI Gamer fic...

canonically, it's impossible for a wielder of Imagine Breaker to have anything even resembling a supernatural ability like "The Gamer"... but I guess I can suspend my disbelief of this one glaring plothole, with the hope that this fanfic will still be entertaining.

shit fic kys

The whole time reading this I'm just imagining the great saga from i've been reincarnated as a slime.